Character : Male

[rikrog]

looks to me like the ears are too high? maybe not
also the brow line may need to be more difined?
:shrug:

[SDIT]

yes the ears are too high. They should go from where the eyeball starts at the top to the bottom of the nose. I hope i am being clear. Besides that, check the topology a little, your edgeloops seem to need some tweaking. The inside of the ear too. The upper part looks flat. If you feel that area you will notice that some people have a ridge that goes through it, and it's concave, following the direction of the top part.
Good start!

[Aearon]

good to see some work from you m@. top notch model from the looks of it, the mesh needs some tweaking though.. you advised me to develope my character completely for this months challenge even though i only wanted to show him from behind... i did it and it payed off. now i advise you to go all the way with a clean mesh, even though you don't plan to animate him :wip:

you can see some of the messiness in the rendered version..i'll just post a paintover

[mv]

thank you for your crits, very useful.

fist : hehe what can I answer to that? only ...
... that I will clean my mesh :D

[jrwells]

Excellent looking model, the only flaw that I think I can see is that the bottom of the ear lobe looks too fat, bulbus even. And looking at this model I don't know what it is about it, but he almost looks like he should be a black man. I think it is in the nose on the front view, but looking at the nose from the angled view it seems pretty long, but noses are funny like that so I guess I cannot complain, maybe open the nostrels a bit to compensate for the long nose.

I am asumming the detail of the neck will come with the developement of the body, but if not, he has a very thin face, so I don't think the neck would be so smooth, more definition is needed for this muscular of a build.

[mv]

jrwells : thank you. Yes, the neck details will come with the rest of the body.
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A slight update.. But I think it changed much, and I'm quite satisfied. I also cleaned the mesh a little, and it helped me :) .. But I fear that if I try to change the mesh too much, I will lose the style of the face (I don't use reference)
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http://perso.wanadoo.fr/v-h/mathias/30.jpg
http://perso.wanadoo.fr/v-h/mathias/mhwire03.jpg

[Aearon]

:D

nothing to crit, much improved. the areas i suggested are definitely 'fixed', looks more than clean enough to me now. on to new deeds!!

[mv]

Update. Still very WIP, but suggestions welcome.
http://perso.wanadoo.fr/v-h/mathias/maleb01.jpg

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