character concept - to cliché?

[_dan_]

http://www.danielforsgren.com/forum/girly_2.jpghttp://www.danielforsgren.com/forum/girly_4.jpg

[cuse]

I like her, think she has good form and nice style... Show more when you can, think it looks great!



cuse

[Chris Antonelle]

i like all versions so far
im loving the second version - but minus the gas mask - that gun rocks
keep us posted!:thumbsup:

[Vizualbyte]

Awesome sketches!! :buttrock:
Glad to know there are others out there who sketch in red pencils.. heh

[wal_russ]

Nice sketchs. I like you style, what kind of red pencil did you use

[Soulstorm]

hmmz, red pencil fans? exactly what is the advantage of using a red pencil instead of a grey one?

[vasa]

Really nice!
I love red/blue pencil, and pen sketches, drawings!
Especially these.

Beautiful! Please post more!

[KazuyaMochu]

great skeches. good lines, good shape! like it alot.

cliché? I don't know... is it a lara croft rip off? id doesn't look like. I tink the cliché about girls in games, is that for some reason, and wrong reason (being that the feminin body is fisically less resistent that male) women seem to have alot less armor...

Like over the breasts... on the legs, ok, I know it's to show the body and all, to make it more appelling, make them more sexy and have more charisma. but hey. this is concept world right? your mind is free! I think you should get away mostlly from cliché behaviour rather than cliché looks. since there are some thing that you cant really change... like... having a gun, having armor. and for as much as you chage it, it's still armour....

make her have a really cool personality, that you can illustrate with stances and clothing, or color. she has red hair, right? give me the idea of a rebel girl, that as allways used boy toys and has grown up to prove she can be as good as man in what ever she is doing. that's the feeling I get from looking to you concept.

(damn this was long! sorry)

Kazuya Mochu

[_dan_]

thanks everyone for comment the concept.
and here is some updates of the vheicle she is going to drive, i will probably go for the roadster.....

(red - prismacolor)

http://www.danielforsgren.com/forum/girly_car_2.jpg
http://www.danielforsgren.com/forum/girly_3.jpg

[vasa]

Hey man, this is really good!

What program do you use for color sketches? Painter? Photoshop?
I like the metal body of the car!
This will be damn good. :beer:

[_dan_]

vasa: i used mainly painter but some photoshop work also.

[bumskee]

:buttrock:

it's really good, i wanna say something but lost for words...

[CoolBlueMan]

I like the girl design, the color, poses and sketches... great work. You got some nice style.
But I don't like the "car" too much. A motorbike would fit her better?

I don't see so many different ideas as you say. She is more or less the same. Maybe the gas mask is not as interesting, and the hair of the first drawing is too bright, and having three "branches" (I don't know the right word in English), makes her less agressive.

Anyway, the concept and the whole image are attractive.

[Rey]

I realy like the image w/ the girl resting on the car.
The vehicle is really cool.
The hair definately gives her style.

The gas mask and boots are cliche, but I like the gun in the boot.

[jerbille]

Youve done a Really good job !!!!

Thats Great Stuff !!!:buttrock:

[Pyke]

I like the gas mask-or at least the concept of a 'gas mask' style thing covering her face. When i see her i think of a desert, so maybe not a gas mask, but some sort of filter that stops sand from going in2 her mouth and eyes...

[jawine]

Hi :)

It's not supergoundbreaking but it's certainly not cliche.
I like the first scribble most. I also like the eyes (no pupils) i think its important these stay this way.

I think the style this is drawed it will be important, the sketches show an individual style, but if the final product will be painted in a really common style it might get a bit cliche-like again.

Keep up the good work! :)

#posting when i should be working#

Jawine :surprised

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