3d-stills work for my website

[jampoz]

Oh God, that's truly cool :thumbsup:

How will the navigation work? Post more about it, please
You going with html+static images or shockwave flash+animations?

Explain more about it, please, and post more renders of the navigating process 'cause this one rock :buttrock:

[Edouard]

and a little update

http://www.want-ed.com/pictures upload/3.jpg

C&C please?

[esse]

Nice imagery! What renderer did you use?

And yes, I am curious to see your site navigation, so please post some links.

Cheers!

[pbinga]

thats really cool!! I love the look of it. :thumbsup:

i'd love to see more. your web address??

[jdevin]

Looks great. I think the bell at the front door is a little hard to make out just because of where its placed. Maybe if you moved it away from all those lines in that area. I like the dog house addition.

[Edouard]

and a little update

http://www.want-ed.com/pictures upload/4.jpg


The place will get some dirt...I will map it soon.
the software that I use is 3dmax 5 with the scanline render

C&C please?

[Pezz3D]

I'm not ussually the one to dish out the crits but I think the sign is a little out of place maybe behind the house in the distance?

Anyway cool style man I like it :thumbsup:

[jampoz]

Yeh my only crit is about the sign also...

Put it in the background or rotate the camera so it's more visible
If you put it in the background it could be something like "Welcome to DesignED country" ehehehehe :o)

Hummm, you could put it on the left side of the pic, still a bit in the background (make it a big sign so it will make up for the distance)

[Edouard]

and a little update

http://www.want-ed.com/pictures upload/5.jpg


the billboard has got an other place, and I worked some more on the lightning

C&C please?

[jampoz]

Maybe it's the size of the render, maybe it's the light, but you can't read ED correctly
Low the light or make a little darker border around the ED thing

You know, just for the heck of details... you could add a little stairs to reach the billboard... for 'maintenance' or for changing picture, and so on... :o)

Now we need puffy clouds and we're ready to go! :o)


Oh! And don't forget the bowl from which the dog is supposed to eat, and put his name on it too!


EDIT: If it's daylight, there shouldn't be lights on the billboard... right?

[Edouard]

and a little update

http://www.want-ed.com/pictures upload/6.jpg


C&C please?

[wesware]

A great little scene!
IMO it is being ruined by the dagger grass. I would consider doing away with it all together and develop your flat grass texture a little (or perhaps making it significantly less bold... adding some rotation and asymmetry, and thinner). I think the lighting could be softened a little.

perfect little house.
You might consider putting it into a deformer and distorting some of the right angles and perspective of the house... just a little. Everything is a little off-kilter except for the vertical and horizontals of the house itself)

[Pezz3D]

Yeah I Think the dagger grass makes it look weird I liked the happy daylight pretty green grass!:p

[Edouard]

A little update...I started with new grass..your wish is mine..

http://www.vi2.com/getFile/207927.jpg

[jampoz]

... hummmmm .... :curious:

[Gremlin]

the lighting looked much better before you added the ground/grass/sign :surprised

but I like the style!
Cheers,
:beer:

[Edouard]

and a little update

http://www.want-ed.com/pictures upload/8.jpg


C&C please?

[jampoz]

:eek:

Shit!

Now that's what I'm talking about! Wonderful work! :buttrock:

[Remi]

Great style....very refreshing feel to it. The bricks you added to the house really sell it...and the lighting is much better than the previous posts....I don't much care for the grass but that my opinion. Great job.:thumbsup:

[Edouard]

And with a new sky

http://www.vi2.com/getFile/209113.jpg

C&C

[Yoshua]

Hey

I like the current result, it seems pretty complete in my book. I have no crits, I really like it, everything looks good and has great style. :D

Thanks

[jampoz]

Whoa it's ready to go on the web site now!

Work on other renderings, please, explain how this picture will fit into the navigation

[mattmos]

Love the feel of the modelling, only crit I have is the lighting - if it's dusk then where is the keylight on the house coming from? You've got the sun setting behind the house at the moment...

[Edouard]

I will work on the lightning, before I render the final render, I will also make a sleeping dodo for in the doghouse

[Edouard]

Hello guys, I have started the model of the dodo, the dodo is one of the characters of my site...(more characters to come), I want to place the dodo by the dog house, in this scene C&C please.

http://www.vi2.com/getFile/214695.jpg

The scene is still a WIP but I wanted to take a little break from it.

[briancole]

I love your style!!!


(sweet domain name too!)

[Edouard]

Thanks I'm happy you like it.

someone else some C&C??

[xyzlink]

I love your design, colors and composition, I just would loose the big sign. The only thing that the sign does is to take away from such a gorgeous landscape.

[Pezz3D]

Right into C&C? ok...

The feathers on the back of the head have a different color then the rest of the bird and it ends up looking like the are floating behind his head.

The headphones need a cord too.:thumbsup:

Maybe the eyelids should be a bit of a different color? More pinkish maybe?

The eyes are really cool make them brighter and have them stand out more! :)

Great job though! The style and characterazation(spelling?) is amazing you do awesome work man!

[pica$$0]

Yeah get rid of the sign. It doesnt fit the style of the house

[Corth]

I wouldn't get rid of the sign, I would like to see it facing a different direction though. Right now it looks as if the sign is being 'blocked' by the house. Maybe put a country road to the side of the sign as well. I really do think the sign should stay, and I've liked the brighter lit renders alot more. Those are my C&C, keep up the good work! :cool:

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