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SimonPickard
07-08-2003, 01:23 AM
Hello all,

I've just finished another 10second club clip and was wondering if I could have some feedback on it please.

This was more of a speed test as I only had about 4 nights after work to do it! Gulp! It was a mad sound file as well heh!

Anyhow let me know what you think.

http://www.simonpickard.dsl.pipex.com/Movies/10sec_Jun_2003.mpg

Regards,

Simon.
www.simonpickard.co.uk

Yorgo12345
07-08-2003, 02:04 AM
loved it :thumbsup:

tubby
07-08-2003, 02:15 AM
wow that's really well done, i love the waiter's body language, really looks alive. thats crazy for 4 days, really good. as far as nitpicking, there is a slight pop on the end of "shakes", and at the end where the customer laughs, maybe lean him foreward or back as he does it. really nice work!:thumbsup:

verbal007
07-08-2003, 02:19 AM
Looks pretty good, as always. The only thing I would fix is the character on the right... his left hand is passing through the table pretty badly.

- Jeremy

hwachai
07-08-2003, 07:45 AM
looks good.
!!!

:beer:

SimonPickard
07-08-2003, 11:34 AM
Thanks guys for the feedback. Yeah there are a load of little things I need to fix on this one. Time was against me really. Things like the hand poping through will be fixed ASAP.

I like the idea of the guy leaning forward. I didn't really have a clue what to do with the guy at the end.

Thanks,

Simon.

okkio
07-08-2003, 12:23 PM
I really like it! Good work, both characters fit the audio really well.

SimonPickard
07-08-2003, 10:52 PM
Thanks,

In terms of the models, well I think they are maybe a little too basic now. I need somethink that is going to push me more I guess.

Onto next months 10sec clip I guess! LOL

Thanks again for the feedback,

Regards,

Simon

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