CGTalk - DWIV - 3D - adib

ROBOTTANK

03-16-2009, 09:42 AM

Hell yeah, great start, I like the standing pose concept, although this creature doesn't seem as a leader (Demon Lord), he actually seems just below a master (taking orders). In a sense, seems a bit frail, but great concept overall.

NavigatorJones

03-16-2009, 09:48 AM

Very nice! I like how sinewy he looks, but on the other hand ROBOTTANK has a point, he prob needs to be beefed up a bit more to look more like a Demon Lord :D

VonMarsch

03-16-2009, 10:05 AM

Nice concept work but be careful with that standing pose because rules say: "Demon Lords are larger than 20x20x20 feet and do not possess any human characteristics."

adib

03-16-2009, 10:19 AM

Thanks guys! Very helpful! Here is an update,what do you think?
Best to you all!

http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/354/demon002.jpg

adib

03-16-2009, 11:14 AM

Another update.Hope you liked!:buttrock:

http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/5213/demon004.jpg

adib

03-16-2009, 12:50 PM

update-pose:)

http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/9869/demon005.jpg

NavigatorJones

03-16-2009, 01:38 PM

Ohh yeah I like how it rears up like that in the 4th pic!

adib

03-16-2009, 01:52 PM

Concept composition:buttrock:

http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/915/demon006.jpg

nellement

03-16-2009, 02:10 PM

Hey,nice start,would be better to try to make him more stable and stronger stance,right now he looks a lil weak at the legs area

Temporal

03-16-2009, 02:21 PM

Looking cool so far! I think it'd be nice to see some kind of additional adornment on the tentacles, or to have some additional element to them besides just the sticks . . . which are by themselves still pretty awesome

adib

03-16-2009, 02:56 PM

Hey,nice start,would be better to try to make him more stable and stronger stance,right now he looks a lil weak at the legs area

Looking cool so far! I think it'd be nice to see some kind of additional adornment on the tentacles, or to have some additional element to them besides just the sticks . . . which are by themselves still pretty awesome

Im thinking right now to see what I will improuve my model,but also I must think of my polygons.

Thanks guys!GO CGSociety team!:buttrock:

GaeasHerald

03-16-2009, 05:30 PM

Cool start Adib. It's good that you got rid of the human features it had in the first sketch, but I think you could go a bit further and make it less conventional. Jazz it up with some unusual placing of the wings/legs/head...

Anyway, great sketches and have a lot of fun!

MartinNielsen

03-16-2009, 11:05 PM

Nice drawings :thumbsup: I agree with GaeasHerald. It could use some deformations. Good luck :)

adib

03-17-2009, 05:13 AM

Thanks guys! More update soon.:bounce:

Ferx

03-17-2009, 06:12 AM

Hey Adrian,

Really cool sketches! :D Really nice color for your demon. I´m agree with Gerardo. Maybe you can try some sketches with a more masive body, like a rino :) only a comment. Good luck and waiting for more updates! Cheers mate! :beer:

adib

03-17-2009, 02:43 PM

Thanks Ferx! I work rigth now on,to make him more impresive!:thumbsup:

SebastianWunnicke

03-17-2009, 04:29 PM

cool concept, his floating tentacle legs are great, perhaps you should define the knee area a bit more. An interessting start.

adib

03-17-2009, 05:48 PM

Hi,

another update,with stronger arms...

http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/401/demon007.jpg

adib

03-19-2009, 04:45 AM

Update,modeling...

http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/161/demon008.jpg

syrez-one

03-19-2009, 09:49 AM

hello adrian, fast as ever nice your already in production :)

the stronger arms definitly support the whole body alot better! the colors really make it your style already :)

looking forward!! keep it up!

adib

03-20-2009, 04:52 AM

Thanks SebastianWunnicke and syrez-one ! Another wip...

http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/6339/demon009.jpg

Ferx

03-20-2009, 04:57 AM

Hey Adrian,

The head modeling is looking really good :D Like the new arms for your concept!
Waiting for more updates! Cheers!! :beer:

adib

03-22-2009, 12:07 PM

Thanks Ferx! Here is a new update.Is just a scketch in Zbrush.First I will add more edges because right now I have only 5000 triangles,and after I will start to make details for normal map.

http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/1521/demon010.jpg

ersinerturk

03-22-2009, 12:22 PM

it's great so far. ugly and scary as it should be as a demon.
regards

adib

03-22-2009, 03:42 PM

Thanks ersinerturk! Here is update...

http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/1248/demon011.jpg

MartinNielsen

03-23-2009, 08:14 AM

Nice surface. That helped a lot :)

OKMER

03-23-2009, 08:55 AM

yeah great start man!
just that his toes dont seem very handy.
Keep m coming!

namnocilis

03-23-2009, 08:57 AM

Are you really gonna go with those details further on the last update..? i couldn't really understand whats happening there, those are just details.. i liked your concept sketch and the maya basemesh.. but zbrush details is not happening, you need to spend time on those details refining it and give it more sense.. Waiting for the updates

adib

03-23-2009, 09:14 AM

Nice surface. That helped a lot :)

thanks,I work on!

yeah great start man!
just that his toes dont seem very handy.
Keep m coming!

Right now was just a detail test.I will work on the lowpoly geometry and redu the UV and after I work on details more.Thanks OKMER!

Are you really gonna go with those details further on the last update..? i couldn't really understand whats happening there, those are just details.. i liked your concept sketch and the maya basemesh.. but zbrush details is not happening, you need to spend time on those details refining it and give it more sense.. Waiting for the updates

Yes I know.On my next update you will see the difference.

Best to you guys!

adib

03-26-2009, 04:55 AM

working on details...

http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/9956/demon017.jpg

adib

03-27-2009, 04:58 AM

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/3169/demon013.jpg
After I made some test on detail,I decide it to change the shape a little,so here it is:

adib

03-28-2009, 12:49 PM

update...

http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/9326/demon014.jpg

adib

03-29-2009, 07:56 PM

Working on texture...

http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/1684/demon015.jpg

adib

03-30-2009, 10:59 AM

Hi,guys I really need your opinion about my progress.:wip:

adib

04-13-2009, 06:16 AM

Update...

http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/5932/demon016.jpg

adib

04-16-2009, 05:32 AM

Changing the shape a little and the texture...

http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/9956/demon017.jpg

adib

04-17-2009, 11:21 AM

I almost done with the model and texture,now I will start to make a strong pose.
Update...
http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/6442/demon018.jpg

DarkBlueArt

04-17-2009, 11:31 AM

Hello

I think the texture looks okay, but in my eyes there are several issues to fix. The texture looks a bit blurry, and there is a lack of sharp edges or different colours. It looks a bit cloudy and mushy. I would add some tones of black into the texture.
The wings looks good, i like the transparent-effect, but you can see where the alpha-map ends, i would fade it out more.
The big claws could get more details.

Keep on working.

so long

adib

04-18-2009, 12:41 PM

Thanks for your advise DarkBlueArt! Here is an update...

http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/3460/demon019.jpg

adib

05-02-2009, 09:13 PM

Hi guys,there is sometime I didn t update so here it is some of my presentation shots.Please feel free to crit! GO CGSOCIETY TEAM!

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/5518/presentationwip.jpg