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JonC
07-07-2003, 01:12 PM
Hi all,

This is gonna be my first short,
and I really need some C&C for my upcomming animation,
here are some images of the facial expression of the ox, and the setting where it will happen.

I am not gonna explain the story now, but if you have some critics to make that could help me I would really apreciated!

thank you! :)


ps: sorry for my english

http://yeee.free.fr/confusion/planche.jpg

http://yeee.free.fr/confusion/decor.jpg
JonC
07-07-2003, 01:46 PM
other images
http://yeee.free.fr/confusion/ecrase.jpg
http://yeee.free.fr/confusion/boeufjonc5.jpg
p0lym0rph
07-07-2003, 03:34 PM
he he tres sympa comme character design,il a une bonne tête de winner:scream: vivement l'anim
JonC
07-07-2003, 11:46 PM
lol merci ;)
je posterai sans doute bientot un plan de l'anim.
DrakeX
07-08-2003, 12:05 AM
haha i like it :) though i'm not sure what face he's making in that last picture. unless he's saying some odd french sound. je ne parle pas francais.
JonC
07-09-2003, 11:44 AM
haha thx DrakeX

I can imagine him smoking ;)
JonC
07-10-2003, 11:28 AM
PREVIEW of the ANIMATION: http://yeee.free.fr/confusion/tombe.avi

just for info, the ox appears in the air and is gonna take concious of that.

please give me some critics!
thx :)
Klaymen
07-11-2003, 03:08 PM
Haha cant wait for this in the cinemas.. nice work!!
Rhino169
07-11-2003, 05:51 PM
Jon,

Great Work!:applause:

Your cow has alot of character and your animation looks great so far also.
Can't wait to see more!:thumbsup:
mixtus
07-12-2003, 08:08 AM
the cow looks great. I dig the style and simplicity of the background. I noticed in the test animation that his bottom teeth seemed to move a little slower then his bottom jaw. It would be cool also to see his expressions even more exagerated.
thjazi
07-12-2003, 04:24 PM
le style est bien sympa !!!
j'aime bien l'aspect des nuages aussi
JonC
07-13-2003, 01:10 PM
thank you verry much all of you for those comments!

klaymen: thanks! and it will be in the theater in june 2086 :p

Rhino169: thank you, I'll try to make some update, but I wont have a lot of time to do it for the moment.

mixtus: about the jaw, it was actualy in purpouse, but I am glad to have your advice, I'd bette change it ;)
I think it will be without to many problem that I could exagerate the expression, Thx for the advices!

thazi : merci pour le style! en fait nous sommes 2 a faire cette animation, la plupart de ce que je posterai sera entierement de de moi, mais les nuages on été fait par ma partenaire (merci a elle ) .

again thx for those comments! :beer:
themonke
09-08-2003, 02:32 PM
hehe, that is one nice ox, I love the scenery...
(0M1KR0N)
09-08-2003, 04:46 PM
Looks nice ! Like the cartoony setup !
JonC
09-10-2003, 02:33 PM
Thanks a lot!
I dont know if I am gonna work on it again,.. I am suppose to have an entire animation out of it,.. but I lost the will to continue this work :(
Nethermind
11-14-2003, 02:03 AM
The sky and the clouds are super sexy.
I would consider them finished.

Also, The lighting for the cow seems to need tweaking, shadows to dark, and does not reflect enough of the environment around him.
Tree shadows also a little too black.

cool work.
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