A Mountain Scene

[JJASSO]

well the foreground low clouds need more contrast/ black level/shadow gain, cause they have the same shadow levels as the far background clouds and makes the mountains look they are floating in air, also some better mood than just a regular image would make it interesting, I suggest you play with you mountains visual composition and how the would flow visually, also some focal node would help a lot, with some huge cumulus clouds the sense of scale would be improved as well, hope this helps

[kaustavsinha]

Hi jamesvfx,

Thanks alot for these very useful & precious critiques! I'll surely keep these in mind!

By the way, overall do you like this matte painting?

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