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MichelVictor
03-11-2009, 07:48 PM
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Title: Akina in room
Name: Michel Victor Oliveira
Country: Brazil
Software: Photoshop

A scene of a original character that I am developing...called Akina...The history is in the future and I hope you enjoy it
Flayer
03-12-2009, 02:00 AM
Nice figure work! I like the cold urban feel to the setting.
Felipe Ralph
03-12-2009, 05:04 AM
Great job, Trap!

You are working better, i liked the her face and the dragon, very amazing.

cheers! :beer:
RabHanno
03-12-2009, 09:13 AM
Great work.
I like the dragon tattoo on her back. Congrats....
patrickdigi
03-12-2009, 12:50 PM
great, nice face and good tattoo!
phoenix
03-12-2009, 01:33 PM
Loooking good


regards
bakiyaraj
03-12-2009, 02:56 PM
good job... i most like she is hand
MichelVictor
03-12-2009, 07:20 PM
Oh, thank you for all comments, i realy apriciate, its very important to me!
linainverse23
03-12-2009, 08:21 PM
:whistle: Very sexy. The figure design, rendering and pose is beautiful and the technique is smooth and refined. Love the tatoo and skin tones. My only criticism is the deep shadow down her spine and her right contour. It's too strong. I almost thought it was hair at first. Ease up on the black a little, it's a little too saturated and solid looking. The left arm and hand are beautifully done, however.

Love the variations in colors to capture the skin tones. The face is really good and expressive as well. The lether outfit that's sliding off of her is great too. I really love the folds in the material as it bunches around her hips. Very convincing and strong attention to detail and accuracy. My appluads for your efforts. Apart from that one comment, this entire piece is great. Love it, and keep it up.
TMArtist
03-13-2009, 02:27 AM
Michel,

I like the skin tones very much on the girl.

My only crit is to suggest possibly adding a little more reflected and scattered light from the background.
Overall, I really enjoyed your painting. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Regards,
MichelVictor
03-13-2009, 04:11 AM
Thank you Linainverser (dota?) and TMartist for the comments...

Lina: I need more pratice in hairs, i dont know how reproduce i better hair until now, but i will try in the next painting, thank you for the strongest and detail comment!
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