post-apo character, need help

[strobel]

I like the concept so far. BUT i think you definitley need to add somthing in the direction the guy is looking.Right now hes looking off-screen. And I would work on the legs again, with the blanket covering as it does now, they look very flat. almost on level with the wheelchair.I'd Just Hint for the knees and darken the space between the legs a bit.

Also the lightning on the front right robot-leg (from the viewer point) seems a bit odd. And the front turret looks a bit distortet/bent upwards. Same goes for the red barrels...perspective seems a bit off. Come to think of it...tilt the wheelchair a bit to the right so it matches with the robot-walker Oo

[smas]

I didnt notice the wheelchair.
Maybe you should try to make the chair a bit different. Anyway I think he would need a seatbelt! To increase the post-apocaliptic feel it might be good if u show how the wheelchair is connected to the "machine". Some straps perhaps..
I like the concept!

[PencilEater]

I didnt notice the wheelchair.


I based on an old wheelchair,but I think it was a bad idea:P

Anyway I think he would need a seatbelt! To increase the post-apocaliptic feel it might be good if u show how the wheelchair is connected to the "machine". Some straps perhaps..

Thats a nice idea, I had a problem how to attach the chair to the vehicle...


I like the concept so far. BUT i think you definitley need to add somthing in the direction the guy is looking.Right now hes looking off-screen. And I would work on the legs again, with the blanket covering as it does now, they look very flat. almost on level with the wheelchair.I'd Just Hint for the knees and darken the space between the legs a bit.

Also the lightning on the front right robot-leg (from the viewer point) seems a bit odd. And the front turret looks a bit distortet/bent upwards. Same goes for the red barrels...perspective seems a bit off. Come to think of it...tilt the wheelchair a bit to the right so it matches with the robot-walker Oo

Thnkas for the advices, I'll definitely use them;]

[PencilEater]

The previous idea evolved a little and now it's closer to machine designe;] So there's another idea:

http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/4348/post2copy.jpg

Any advices are welcome

[PencilEater]

update:

http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/4348/post2copy.jpg

I think that there's something wrong with his right hand...if yopu noticed any other mistaces,please type it

[PencilEater]

Here's the final image:

http://digart.img.digart.pl/data/img/vol0/10/76/download/3333187.jpg

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