View Full Version : wich one do u like best?
Wich one should I continue working on?
Any comments are welcome :)
http://forums.cgsociety.org/attachment.php?attachmentid=139294
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Please advice on how to improve! and wich one to finish!
SocialSystem
03-10-2009, 04:05 PM
I'd like to see you continue to work on the second.
In the first one I couldn't figure out what was going on exactly. The man's pose seems weird and out of context and the angel thing is just kind of floating there, off balance.
I love the interaction in the second. The angel's pose is a lot more expressive and much better. The anatomy of her torso and breasts have also been a little improved.
That's just my two cents. I think you could work the first one to make the angel's pose more menacing to achieve a similar effect. Regardless of which you choose to go with, you'll need to look at the angel's anatomy again.
I agree and thank you for the input.
There are a lot to work on the anatomy but what is most bothering?
Any specifics on the anatomy?
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