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smas
03-07-2009, 02:42 PM
This is a head I created in zbrush.
Now Im adding color and hair and so on in photoshop.
Been strugeling with the hair for a while now.
Any coments on what looks good or bad?

http://forums.cgsociety.org/attachment.php?attachmentid=139279
smas
03-08-2009, 04:09 PM
Ive decided to add a body to the head..
Any comments on the proportions?
Or suggestions?
http://forums.cgsociety.org/attachment.php?attachmentid=139320
Ive decided to add a body to the head..
Any comments on the proportions?
Or suggestions?
smas
03-08-2009, 08:50 PM
http://forums.cgsociety.org/attachment.php?attachmentid=139331
working on it...
smas
03-08-2009, 11:06 PM
Critique and comments are allways welcome!..
http://forums.cgsociety.org/attachment.php?attachmentid=139338
Critique and comments are allways welcome!..
DArcy1
03-08-2009, 11:49 PM
I was trying to figure out what was bothering me about this; it's her lips I think. The upper seems too big or the lower seems too small. Could you post the front side zbrush renders?


Cheers

D.
smas
03-08-2009, 11:58 PM
Thank you! Ill look in to that...
http://forums.cgsociety.org/attachment.php?attachmentid=139339
DArcy1
03-09-2009, 02:18 AM
Yeah. I think her upper lip is too large and sticks out too much. Perhaps the distance between her nose and upper lip is a bit much as well? Post this 3D render in the 3D WIP forum and you'll get more detailed suggestions.

Cheers

D'Arcy
smas
03-09-2009, 04:48 PM
IŽll try to change those things and see what it looks like.
For now iŽll continue working on the body.
Thanks alot for the input!
smas
03-09-2009, 06:47 PM
Hmm... It look better! What do u think?
But.. perhaps some of the sadness in her face disapeared? gah..
I think IŽll leave it for now, unless I get more good pointers :)
http://forums.cgsociety.org/attachment.php?attachmentid=139370
Mboehman
03-09-2009, 06:55 PM
She doesn't look sad to me, she looks more angry. I think it's because her eyebrows are pointing down. If it weren't for the tears I wouldn't have guessed she was supposed to be sad.
DArcy1
03-12-2009, 01:21 AM
Her lip looks better. But she doesn't look sad. Take a look here:
http://www.friedmanarchives.com/Carribean/pages/A%20Sad%20Face%20300%20dpi%20PICT4599.htm
and adjust your 3d model to match those features even a bit - right now your model has a neutral face - fine when sculpting but not when you want so show emotion.

Hope that helps.

D'Arcy
smas
03-12-2009, 07:07 PM
thank you for the feedback.
IŽm not aiming for a very sad look, more like "I cared 2 seconds ago, now I dont give a shit"--
Hahah hard to explain.. anyway I think the nostrils looked more "sad" before I changed the mouth.. sounds weird huh? :D
...wish I had more time for working on this
DArcy1
03-13-2009, 12:07 AM
That's an interesting expression - I suspect you're just going to have to ask someone to make that face and take a picture - trying to figure out what it "might" look like will just give you a migraine...


D.
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