character: girl crying

[Nedim_S]

Bad eye!

[Kartoffel]

Its very dark. If you want to make something look dark make a high cotrast, but more light.

The light on the edges in the first pic doesn't look realistic or good, yo can make such an effect with a backligt in your 3d-scene.

And finally the forehead is edgy.

[TheGreenGiant]

Originally posted by Nedim_S
Bad eye!

hell. why post if you're not going to bother to make a proper comment.

hello. your thread looks like it belongs more in the WIP section.

C+C

It's a bit hard to tell what is going on but the photoshopped one (which I take to be the one on top) looks, well. Bad. The filter you applied to it, does nothing and makes it look grainy.

Too dark.

And going to what Nedim_S is kind of posting about but you need to adjust the specularity on your eyeball. No eyeball is that glazed.

That said, a frontal could be useful. Hope this kind of helps

[Soulstorm]

the head looks like it only has 1 half in this render. i dont know if you forgot to attach the other half/use symmetry..

[Naseem]

i agree with the eye prob, also the tears look more like blood, it need more work. sorry about my harsh pointers.:shame:

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