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andreasB
03-05-2009, 05:16 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/newgallerycrits/g38/277538/277538_1236276989_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/newgallerycrits/g38/277538/277538_1236276989_large.jpg)

Title: Beauty is in the Details
Name: andreas bohn
Country: Germany
Software: 3ds max

my first human face, done with 3Dmax8 and MentalRay only, no real-life reference ... have a look at the work-in-progress, its funny ^^ : http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=5689067#post5689067 <- thanks to all of you

greetings

Matasorapit
03-06-2009, 12:53 AM
For your first face that's a really good job. Well done.

Seijiro
03-06-2009, 09:59 AM
There is a problem with his/her ear. The middle picture down below (front view).

BDismukes
03-06-2009, 01:53 PM
Interesting work. Does he have a name?

Also, fool me once, shame on you. Fool me twice, look at this thread: http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?f=43&t=648879&page=1&pp=15

uiwillwin
03-06-2009, 02:24 PM
wheres those wires... lol

tastyUdon
03-06-2009, 07:34 PM
wheres those wires... lol

I believe they can be found on the link BDismukes posted, lol. There's something wrong with the ear, a few vertices are jutting out.

robo3687
04-22-2009, 06:12 AM
no real-life reference


lol...no kidding...would never have guessed....

having just read through your WIP thread i must say i'm quite appalled by your ignorance, arrogance and complete disregard for the comments and criticisms of your fellow members.

here's just a small list of things i've noticed wrong with this model (you did after all ask us to be specific)


- can't tell at first glance if it is a man or a woman
- hair doesn't help this fact as it is part short and fuzzy and part long and straight
- the nose seems malformed
- the corners of the mouth are bad, to sharp, clearly caused by your 'revolutionary' and 'trend setting' modeling method.
- there looks to be some bad stretching and/or mesh issues where the ear joins onto the head
- eyebrows look bad
- eyelashes look misplaced, too small and not curled enough
- the iris is too small, you shouldn't be able to see the whole thing...unless it's quite surprised at how it came out...
- the neck lacks definition


thats just the small list...i do hope that you take these things on board and continue to work on your skills. Just realise that no one is perfect and no ones methods are either, but one can only become better by using those around them to learn and progress in their abilities....so in future listen to the experienced critiques being given to you and don't proclaim that you know better because more often than not chances are you don't.

BDismukes
04-22-2009, 03:22 PM
True, except for one thing:
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/231/picture24.png
It happens, and as a result there's really no way to take anything andreasB has said personally. The dimensions of anguish the self loathing narcissist endures are difficult to imagine and all anyone can do is hope he gets over it and offer understanding or at least withhold judgment when he does.

Bd.

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