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SpeedSnake
03-04-2009, 04:56 PM
http://www3.picturepush.com/photo/a/1461366/220/1461366.bmp (http://www.picturepush.com/public/1461366)

DArcy1
03-07-2009, 04:34 AM
Your backgound colors are waaay too bright. Tone them down at least 70%. Right now they just look like random blobs and they compete with the spaceship for attention. Maybe tone the planet down just a tad as well.


Cheers

D'Arcy

SpeedSnake
03-07-2009, 08:04 AM
ok..i'll consider that...

KeithLarkin
03-07-2009, 04:49 PM
I like the idea behind the work.

Like mentioned before, have a go at toning down the nebula by about 70%, try to remember that distance is a huge factor in a scene like this and the nebula would be millions of light years away, so the amount of detail that you have would not be visible.

The light sources on your ship seem a little messed up for some reason, i cant wuite put my finger on it.. but a good attempt none the less.

Again with the large planet try and tone it down and just have a play and see what works best.

Good Luck.

SpeedSnake
03-07-2009, 07:27 PM
ok, thanks for apreciation...:)

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