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urico
03-03-2009, 09:14 PM
Hello,

Would like some some C&C on this animation I've been working on. Thank you.

Wrong Bathroom (http://www.animatedlim.com/Wrongbathroom.mov)

saraloup
03-04-2009, 03:44 AM
Hi, urclo,
Seems awkward to me because she doesn't actually look at the bathroom. I guess you can assume there are mirrors where the camera is but to me it is unclear how she figures out she's in the wrong bathroom. Maybe you can have her start turning in around the door?

jurffy
03-04-2009, 06:43 AM
I think the entrance looks good. But I would think that after the surprise, she would not continue to look, but block her face with the cellphone arm and shy away quickly.

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