demonter (wacom)

[gilbert_chong]

http://www.getcybered.com/sites/birdy/data/home/demonter%203.jpg

[gilbert_chong]

http://www.getcybered.com/sites/birdy/data/home/demonter%20with%20bg.jpg
final step
thx 4 watchin...................crit plzzz....
dono this background suit this character or not.............
my background actualy is a devil..............
anyone 1 can give comment plzzzzzzzzzz
thz

[PANZER]

as said in the last thread you posted, the colors are too strong. and the strokes are immature. try not to leave white spots when painting.next time, you can experiment using different paper colour.you should look for reference on how ppl else colors, theres tons of them good illustrators out there.
:)

[Black Jesus]

the background is way too strong... the character looks nice though... but his left arm is too big and there's something funky going on with his left foot... it's bent to much to the left or something.

[Nerv]

Same, the stroke problem i told you before in icq.

And about the background.... you need to plan the overall layout before you paint it. Try study some tutorial in how to paint, because your painting looks very dirty, maybe your're not very fammiliar with painter.

About the colour, try remember what you have learn in colour study, every colour indicates to certain mood. Example, red and black indicate to violence and gore in vampires' movies. Do consider what colour to be used.

p/s: I don't think that cloud and waterfall suits a demon.

Work smart and study hard! :beer:

[gilbert_chong]

emmmmmmm im still tryin on my color....
thx 4 ur advice..i will learn n study more but just still can get the sence...
actualy the bg is not a waterfall hehehehe........
watch deeply actualy is a devil face.........
but i just didnt make it too clear.....hope tat the next 1 will be better.....

[requiem]

I think everyone was fairly accurate on their critiques. You seem to have the determination to draw, and that is the most important part. I have to express frustration at this type of drawing though. This is a truly fantastic character design destroyed by generic pose. You could call it the “beginning anime pose”. I’ve seen hundreds of drawings like this. I even drew a couple a while back. It’s a vertical pose with one extreme foreshortened arm. It has gotten generic thanks to the overuse in anime (gun/knife pointed straight at camera). This type of foreshortening is rarely used in art, and even when it is, it’s rarely successful. The only proper example I can think of is the “uncle Sam wants ‘you’” poster. I’m not saying don’t use it, but understand it before you use it.
Keep at it, but start with the basics. Try to get an understanding of pose. Look at yourself in the mirror and examine how your weight is dispersed. See what happens when you switch your weight from one leg to the other. Study contrast and start planning out a color scheme even before you start drawing. Study pose and the line of motion.
Here is a great step by step reference for color, composition and contrast.

http://www.imphead.com/about/blendboywip/bb1.html

You have great design. If you can just hammer out the basics you’re going to be really good.

[gilbert_chong]

thz man..........donno y i tried many time also cant make it.....
actualy my artwork tat i draw is not the style tat i like...
just donno how to follow..............
i think im useless in this line.....
need more time then normal ppl......
thz anyway.....i will try n find some refrence to follow...
hope this time will creat out the style i like...

[requiem]

hey, dont get bummed out. you have a lot of imagination.
and in the way of finding you own style, try drawing from life. that way you dont get stuck in someone elses style (as in drawing from a comic book or something)
just keep it up. i saw your online stuff. there is a lot of creativity there.

[gilbert_chong]

realy realy thz man.................
u help me alot ar.................
except my master u realy teach me alot.....................
i will try my best.............
:blush: hope tat my next post i will show u some nice 1!!!!!!!

[gilbert_chong]

http://www.getcybered.com/sites/birdy/data/home/demonterbgrefine%202.jpg
see this background fit my character or not....:annoyed:

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