matte painting needs improvement!

[DanielWray]

Im getting a page 404 from deviant art, perhaps use a diffrent hosting site?

[kmksunfire]

http://kmksunfire.deviantart.com/art/lodge-at-sunset-114102977

[DanielWray]

It works now :)

first thing i noticed is that lens flare, personally i'd take that from the image, it detracts from it, in my opionion that is. If you like it, leave it :)

secondly around the shore line, usually you'd have some sand, even if just a few feet of it, maybe you could trying adding a little bit of shoreline, to seperate the grass from the water.

Also i think that the house (?) could use some red/ orange'ish lighting on the roof and side, i think this would really tie it into the image a little more, same for high lights on the trees, just a little bit though.

Keep up the good work :)

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