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travisf
02-27-2009, 01:02 AM
hi im a student and this is my first crack at matte painting

http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/1908/icematte.jpg

kmksunfire
02-27-2009, 03:40 PM
I'm no matte painterr, trying to get feedback myself on my own, but thought I would offer my two cents. Like the overall peice, very nice start. My feeling is the left side icecles under the moon are to sharp and bright, if they are set back they should be out of focus? and less bright? also on the right side_top hard to tell what is going on. maybe same soultion for both. seems they are competing with the focal point... Again I could be totally off so take it for what it is.
Great start!
Kevin

travisf
02-27-2009, 08:28 PM
thanks man ya i was looking at the same area wonder what was wrong always good to get a fresh pair of eyes on it

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