still:ball in the garden

[NeBuLa]

wire picture will come soon
http://home.no/monoid/NEBULA/wire%20av%20ball%20i%20hagen.jpg

[caliman]

nice look:)

[NeBuLa]

thx for the one comment man :)

[Soulstorm]

wow thats pretty realistic looking. but it seems to be lacking a bump map

[NeBuLa]

yes i am thinking of and updata but the render time on this picture is very long so maby :)

[NeBuLa]

it will be nice if some one can tell me what is good whith this picture and what that bad so i can work on it. so plz comment :)

[lildragon]

That is precisely why peeps that want serious comments to post in the Focused Crit forum ;) and remember this is a Gallery "Finished" forum

Anyhoo it's a nice image but needs some more attention to the details, for one the ball looks flat to me, I really don't "feel" any dimension to it, also the dirtiness you try to portray looks like a layer applied in Photoshop that simply just sits there.

You need alot more bumps and variation in textures in the scene, I didn't even know a shovel was part of the scene until I saw the wire.

Also your shadows are a bit confusing, for the time of day you have some descent soft shadows all over but under the ball the shadow is very sharp.

And lastly I know you're trying to capture realism, but the grain is a bit too much, and makes the image somewhat distracting because it's so apparent.

-lild

[MarioRothenb.]

very very grainy i think.... bt looks nice......

/mario'

[fla5hdrunk]

Originally posted by NeBuLa
it will be nice if some one can tell me what is good whith this picture and what that bad so i can work on it. so plz comment :)
dawn, i did't know u can read my thoughts :D
i really felt exactly the same
though nice render picture

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