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NeBuLa
07-03-2003, 08:10 PM
This is an updata of some olde stuff i have made. It was render with brazil and modeld with 3dsmax 5.
http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/3d/ball_in_the_garden_v2.jpg

NeBuLa
07-03-2003, 08:34 PM
wire picture will come soon
http://home.no/monoid/NEBULA/wire%20av%20ball%20i%20hagen.jpg

caliman
07-03-2003, 11:45 PM
nice look:)

NeBuLa
07-05-2003, 11:59 AM
thx for the one comment man :)

Soulstorm
07-05-2003, 03:17 PM
wow thats pretty realistic looking. but it seems to be lacking a bump map

NeBuLa
07-05-2003, 06:02 PM
yes i am thinking of and updata but the render time on this picture is very long so maby :)

NeBuLa
07-06-2003, 10:18 AM
it will be nice if some one can tell me what is good whith this picture and what that bad so i can work on it. so plz comment :)

lildragon
07-06-2003, 12:59 PM
That is precisely why peeps that want serious comments to post in the Focused Crit forum ;) and remember this is a Gallery "Finished" forum

Anyhoo it's a nice image but needs some more attention to the details, for one the ball looks flat to me, I really don't "feel" any dimension to it, also the dirtiness you try to portray looks like a layer applied in Photoshop that simply just sits there.

You need alot more bumps and variation in textures in the scene, I didn't even know a shovel was part of the scene until I saw the wire.

Also your shadows are a bit confusing, for the time of day you have some descent soft shadows all over but under the ball the shadow is very sharp.

And lastly I know you're trying to capture realism, but the grain is a bit too much, and makes the image somewhat distracting because it's so apparent.

-lild

MarioRothenb.
07-06-2003, 03:28 PM
very very grainy i think.... bt looks nice......

/mario'

fla5hdrunk
07-06-2003, 04:52 PM
Originally posted by NeBuLa
it will be nice if some one can tell me what is good whith this picture and what that bad so i can work on it. so plz comment :)
dawn, i did't know u can read my thoughts :D
i really felt exactly the same
though nice render picture

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