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SteelyPhil
02-26-2009, 12:37 AM
This is my blocked animation for my character animation class. Please comment and critique to help make it better! http://www.11secondclub.com/forum/img/smilies/smile.png

Thanks

-J

Blocking Pass (http://vimeo.com/3371797)

theskydreamer2003
02-26-2009, 10:49 AM
nice but the finalization doesn't encompass the animation. seeing u animation an idea pooped in my brain for finalization: (first on the beginning the box kinda jump like it is something in it)
a close up with what he sees in the box(btw give it a little more weight, now i put something in it), cold be like an empty (magician hat) hat, he rise,nothing, rotate it nothing, put it back and lift up the box from the table like u do it, but the bottom opens up end a rabbit "falls" on his foot squash it and run the character follows it to horizont line out of the frame. could be something else like nothing sees in the box but when he lift it, the box jumps in his hand again, then a glove(or something hith a glove on its hand) jumps on a string up an smack him. He falls on his back.end of the scene
these are my ideas, hope u like them...

SteelyPhil
02-27-2009, 02:50 AM
Those are some nice story ideas, thanks for your input man, I appreciate it!

-J

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