machine of life

[dodgeOrBURN]

The concept is interesting, you have a lot of nice details, and your fish are great. However it is difficult to find the focus with the two competing light sources- you have done careful work on the central machine but it is too dark to really see. The big black void could use some details to make it more interesting. I hope this is helpful.

[Janoss]

Dear Lynda!

I really thank you for your comments and i think you are right.
The image not really well-ballanced and some of the details are lost ind the dark.
unfortunately i have no more time to work on it.

I saw your entries to the other challanges and i really like the idea of "imminent reflections".
wasting our world, and working against ourselves, hmm. It is also good to see the way you mix 3d and photos into a painterly style. I like it.

Than you again!



I apologize because of my english, i'm a rookie in forums as well.

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