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Yoshikun
02-25-2009, 11:58 AM
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Title: iPhone3G
Name: Marc Williams
Country: Germany
Software: Maya, mental ray

Hi everybody,
because of the critics I received for my recent iphone model, I tried to remodel it again with more polys, so there are no visible hard edges. I also added some details. Again, i worked on this image for about one evening. I hope you like it.
Critics are most welcome!!!
prity
02-25-2009, 05:50 PM
Great render Yoshikun nice and clean, how was done the display ? or is it a jpeg? i´m working in something similar and don´t know how can i make it.

Thanx.
rezatayebi
02-25-2009, 08:10 PM
nice and clean!
however there`s not enough contrast in the final image.
Yoshikun
02-25-2009, 11:28 PM
Hi,

thanks for the critics so far. But keep em commin´!!! :)

@prity: First of all: Sorry for my bad english, I hope you get it: ;)
The display, or better say the glass on top, has got a transparency textur,
with transparence only in the middle were you supposed to see the display.
The display itself is just a simple textured plane placed underneath the glass.
I hope I did help? Good luck with your project!!

Again, thanks for watching!!

Marc
PhilipR
02-26-2009, 04:33 AM
Check the corners of your model you have hard edges
Ricardocabrall
03-26-2009, 10:37 PM
Great render and model congratulations.
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