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darkbytes
02-21-2009, 12:32 AM
Please check out my independent 3D Shortfilm "The Last City on Earth" I did it over a 2 year period on my basement while working as a server in a restaurant, I did everything except the music and voices, I hope you like it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l8Z41-mdNaQ
masn45
02-21-2009, 11:45 PM
Hey darkbytes,

Can tell you've been putting a lot of work into this!

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Good stuff:

Some shots looked good, and I like the overall atmosphere and story. Was also impressed how the city looked. great amounts of detail and a lot of life. Most of the characters also looked alright.

Bad Stuff:

Animation looked painfully stiff and weird. some errors in the texture and lighting here and there. Weird and sometimes obnoxious camera movements. alot of basic stuff that could have been avoided with abit of reseach on animation and composition.

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Overall, I think it was abit under average. Dosn't feel like it's done, mostly do to the bad animation. making a 11 minut 3d film all by yourself is also quite a huge project, if u also want people u don't know to like it.
Cutting the project down to about 4 min and use the rest of the time on perfecting each shot, would probaly have made this a much much better short.

Hope i'm not too harsh og kranky. I'm sure you did this mostly for the fun of it, and not for getting and oscar, but those are my thoughts!

Hope to see some more work from you :)

cheers
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