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heavyness
02-20-2009, 05:35 AM
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2D ChallengeIt's time to gather up your creativity, pull together your talents, and get ready for a new kind of warm up competition in the Dominance War series - Mini Challenges! Although the theme is separate from the main epic event, world champion standings are assured for the best mini comp entries!

To commemorate a new class of competition, we will be using a modified theme from Dominance War I. So this year's first ever Concept Art mini topic is:


War General Portraits!The rules are simple - create a portrait of a leader capable of leading troops to victory! Your war general portrait can be from any time period and any race. As long as he/she/it looks like a war general, has the appropriate team war logo somewhere on the body/clothes, and has the appropriate team colors [found here] (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?f=282&t=728088), everything is good!

This challenge is here for those desiring to practice their art before the main event. So keep it easy, keep it quick, and keep it real.

Rules:
You have 9 days (2 weekends plus 5 days) to finish.

Additional Notes:
- Artists can only join 1 team for any event during dominance war IV. If you start with polycount, you cannot enter another mini challenge or the main event with gameartisans or cgsociety.
- You are not required to enter all challenges. Pick the ones you like, and join.
- Posting your work in progress in this single thread is ABSOLUTLY MANDATORY.
- You can only submit one "up to" 1000x1000 350k max final image. 200w x 1000h is fine. 999w x 500h is fine. This image must include your team logo, your War General's name, and your personal name and/or contact details.
- Only 1 entry per person. Do not create or try to create multiple entries with different user names.
- Final submissions are final. If you upload your final image 4 days before the deadline, do not ask us to change it. Make sure you are happy with your image before you submit it into the system.
- Public voting starts Thursday March 5th to March 8th to find each team's best 5. Each team’s best 5 entries then gather together into a single pool and a grand mini champion chosen and announced with all other Dominance War IV event champions in June.

Deadline:
March 2nd Monday Night 11:59 Eastern time. Voting Starts March 5th.

Final Submission link for CGSociety team Members:
http://www.gameartisans.org/contests/minis/join_cgsociety_2d.html

Final View Entries page for CGSociety:
http://www.gameartisans.org/contests/minis/view_entries_cgsociety_2d_1.html



Good Luck to all those who enter!

heavyness
02-20-2009, 05:36 AM
DO use this thread to post you work in progress and final submission.

DO NOT make a new thread with you work in it.



good luck.

regimon019
02-20-2009, 08:49 AM
Does it have to be based on a true general? or can we make it up... thanks :D

NavigatorJones
02-20-2009, 10:25 AM
Portraits! What an awsome idea :D One question, since a lot of portraits are done in three quartre profile, or at least the body is, how should we go about fitting the the symbol in? Are the vector images meant to be used directly or as reference, ie, are we allowed to bend it a little for perspective reasons or do we have to keep it flat?

REKLAS
02-20-2009, 11:31 AM
My progress on a war general after about 3 hours. Unsure of his name at this point.

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/7293/wargeneralwip001ck9.jpg

yakonusuke
02-20-2009, 12:45 PM
My first approach.


http://mokiji.de/mokiji/229292.ffbdf18a0a21338661deeabf553a696d.jpg

BluntPencil
02-20-2009, 01:06 PM
Rawr! Let's get this party started! Go team!
Chickened out last year, but this year will be different!

Very early test, still trying things out.
http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h100/Sentallia/DW4/general.jpg

NavigatorJones
02-20-2009, 01:07 PM
Lol finally worked out how to upload the picture properly ><

Plain sketch, fleshing him out.

http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/5564/generalhalascopyon3.jpg

BluntPencil
02-20-2009, 01:16 PM
I'm linking mine from my free account on Photobucket.com, I recommend muchly.

NavigatorJones
02-20-2009, 01:24 PM
The colour scheme suits your guy to a T, yakonusuke! :D

NH
02-20-2009, 02:06 PM
I am in :)

DanielCortes
02-20-2009, 02:37 PM
Okay here we go.…
I got up at 5 am to get started on the challenge before going to work. I’m in Argentina, so I was happy to see the rules up by then. There’s nothing outstandingly original here, but I’ve got to finish my entry in three days cuz I’m off on a trip. So pleas let me know what you think, and witch character I should stick with. I know the guy looks a little young but he’s kind of like an Alexander type, I figured no one would go for a young guy. He’s got the gift of foresight and he’s blind.
Well hope to hear from you, and my prayers are with you all. We will prevail!

heavyness
02-20-2009, 03:28 PM
Portraits! What an awsome idea :D One question, since a lot of portraits are done in three quartre profile, or at least the body is, how should we go about fitting the the symbol in? Are the vector images meant to be used directly or as reference, ie, are we allowed to bend it a little for perspective reasons or do we have to keep it flat?

much like REKLAS did, place the logo like it is part of the clothing. it could even be a tattoo, a medal, jewelery... anything.


awesome start everyone!

paddflask
02-20-2009, 04:05 PM
Yay, I'm in too, here's my first sketch very rough want to make a war general with a shark head and human body.

live2contage: In my opinion I think you should stay with the monkey think you can create something more interesting and original with that idea.

NH
02-20-2009, 04:51 PM
Hi there ! Can't stop workingon this concept :)
Here is a b&w first lay out. I am not very happy with the chin... I think i'll make some modification on the facial structure probably to make the character more agressive.
Crits and advises are welcome.
I start to see some gooooood stuff already there, so goodluck for all the mates.

Cheers

NH
02-20-2009, 06:48 PM
Here's the full body sketch :)... the character is finally a kind of a beasty "roman centurion".

DanielCortes
02-20-2009, 08:35 PM
NH: Looking good! It’s got and original face I would try and keep the same concept for the body…les human. I also think you could give him more authority bay changing the look in his eyes and general countenance (the same goes for my monkey…ha!)

paddflask: thanks man! I was actually going to start a new character all together, don’t know… I have little time so maybe I should stick to the monkey.

REKLAS: great stuff, the overall look has a lot of potential.
Hugs to all!

PS: why can’t you see the image I posted as large as other ones? Sorry this is a first time for me, TKS!

DanielCortes
02-20-2009, 08:46 PM
What do you guys think of a full body shot?

sylverleaf
02-20-2009, 09:05 PM
Very interesting theme~

This is my first post here

Hope this kind of contest form can force me to work steadily.

http://features.cgsociety.org/newgallerycrits/g94/362794/362794_1235168826_submedium.jpg

rawwad
02-20-2009, 09:13 PM
Yeah, War began! Let´s make this hard for other sites, grrrr:wip:
here is my start, not finished yet

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/2389/generalkitrawwadgo1.jpg

Phill99
02-20-2009, 11:22 PM
HI all! Looks like there's some great work posted already! This is gonna be a fun one.
Here's a quick sketch and color concept.

NavigatorJones
02-20-2009, 11:49 PM
Hi there ! Can't stop workingon this concept :)
Here is a b&w first lay out. I am not very happy with the chin... I think i'll make some modification on the facial structure probably to make the character more agressive.
Crits and advises are welcome.
I start to see some gooooood stuff already there, so goodluck for all the mates.

Cheers

I dont see anything wrong with his chin XD! Maybe make his mouth a little...sterner? (is that even a word lol XD!) I think he looks awsome :D

NavigatorJones
02-20-2009, 11:51 PM
Wow Rawad, i love those teeth you gave your guy. I love the angles they turn in at. *jealous*

CharlesVarenne
02-20-2009, 11:59 PM
Cool. Finally started! Nice warm up for the big challenge. Good luck every body and let's
have fun!

Here's my first wip post for my general.

http://www.charlesvarenne.com/Images/Drawings/General01_02.jpg

Airflow
02-21-2009, 01:08 AM
This time Cgtalk are going to win.
This is my entry, its very wip at the moment, the suit of armor will probably change.
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l295/airflowzero/GeneralCoruBann.jpg?t=1235182253

REKLAS
02-21-2009, 01:18 AM
Thanks live2contage!

Update 01:
http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/7135/wargeneralwip002.jpg

Feedback is more than welcome.

AdamTSC
02-21-2009, 01:39 AM
Rules question:
Are we allowed to incorporate photographic elements into our portrait (either on the character itself, or the background), or does it need to be all painted?

Sorry if I missed this, but I couldn't find an answer to it anywhere.

Thanks,
Adam

Gatlingg
02-21-2009, 01:57 AM
A surprisingly kind soul (for her experiences) and seasoned tactician with a strong resolve for victory.

First Step: Pencil on paper - done
Next Step: Clean Drawing

http://krhart.com/DWIV/General_Llanii_Preliminary_Sketch.jpg

ShogunWarrior
02-21-2009, 03:09 AM
I read the rules and theres seem to be a mistake... Your rules say, " Post your Work In Progress" is Manditory, in this thread...

Then in the next post you say, DO NOT post your Work In Progress in this thread!

So where do we post our work in progress?? In what thread?? Sorry for the dumb question!!

REKLAS
02-21-2009, 03:27 AM
You should look at his post a bit closer, it says DO post WIP in this thread, do NOT make a new thread.

Read:
DO use this thread to post you work in progress and final submission.

DO NOT make a new thread with you work in it.

walrus
02-21-2009, 03:33 AM
Tibor, that's looking really nice so far - you're so fast! Only thing is, I'd suggest punching up the medals and maybe some other accents, to make sure he looks like a general and not just another soldier.

Great job everyone else, too. Good luck!

tvfunnyman
02-21-2009, 04:07 AM
Here is my early, rough portrait I whipped-up for the big Mini-Competition.

Executive General Sahnah Antonia Reigns...

http://www.flickr.com/photos/thisonehere/3296097379/

Nice warm-up for the big competition to come.

feyshtey
02-21-2009, 04:12 AM
Gatlingg - Outstanding drawing! That linework just makes me envious. And beyond just the great art, you're really setting the bar for character background and development plan. Great approach all around. (And I was hoping to be the first person to submit a female General!)

Reklas - I love the fact that you're going so Non-Standard with your approach, and I like the loose feel. Don't tighten this up too much :)

Airflow - I really like the flow of the design you've put in, but I'm concnerned how it will be judged in regard to "Portraits". There's a ton of potential for it, but it might not be judged well if there's too much emphasis on an action scene. Try moving the concept more toward a tradiitional sitting portrait to fit better with the concept criteria.

Rawwad - Holy Crap . 'nough said. (I really wish I had the vision for light and depth that you've displayed in this prelim.)

So for my part, here's a quick concept that I hope to develop:
http://fc19.deviantart.com/fs40/i/2009/051/0/c/DominanceWar_IV_concept_by_Feyshtey.jpg

madbot
02-21-2009, 04:14 AM
Here we go, just something quick to get me started. I'm going to print it out and continue to draw details over the top. Not sure of his name or story so far.

Great to see some excellent work already.

Phill99
02-21-2009, 08:26 AM
Great work everybody!
Here's some line work over my original sketch

miycko
02-21-2009, 10:20 AM
WOW. You Guys are seriosly good.

OKMER
02-21-2009, 10:48 AM
Yeeeh, war started :)Great start all you guys!!!
Happy to be here with you.
Doodle about a General from a giant underwater race
http://www.remkotroost.com/forums/turtgeneral.jpg
C&C very welcom
Good luck to you all

Megoru
02-21-2009, 10:49 AM
http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/8324/wip0.th.jpg (http://img503.imageshack.us/my.php?image=wip0.jpg)

Hi there, first time I enter a competition here. I'm going to work on a lion-man general, kind of early-medieval style. It won't be the most original, but I hope you'll like it.

MartinNielsen
02-21-2009, 11:20 AM
OKMER: Nice work. It looks like he's drinking beer through the nose :)

OKMER
02-21-2009, 12:18 PM
Martin,:surprised!Iin fact he is.:D:beer:

NavigatorJones
02-21-2009, 12:39 PM
Hey, final sketch, was gonna start colouring but ps broke, so I have to get another one, but I can't do that till monday, but on monday I have to evacuate coz of fire danger. For the whole. Day. ARGH!

Anyway, before I break something...picture!

NavigatorJones
02-21-2009, 12:55 PM
Oh yeah, Phill, the cigar in your dude's mouth is total win :buttrock:

jOuey
02-21-2009, 12:57 PM
hi there, nice to challenge with you :]


first steps, start today
http://www.waart.net/ftp/contest/knight_commander_wip1.jpg

http://www.waart.net/ftp/contest/knight_commander_wip2.jpg

update

step3
http://www.waart.net/ftp/contest/knight_commander_wip3.jpg

step4
http://www.waart.net/ftp/contest/knight_commander_wip4.jpg

update 2

step5
http://www.waart.net/ftp/contest/knight_commander_wip5.jpg

DerrickSong
02-21-2009, 01:31 PM
Hi, i m here to join cgsociety for the DW4 mini contest, my first sketch is here. Good to see you all at here to fight for cgsociety, good luck everybody!


http://i96.photobucket.com/albums/l180/derrick_song/DW4/mini_challenge_sketch_01.jpg

NH
02-21-2009, 02:28 PM
some changes on the arms mouth and chin.

OKMER
02-21-2009, 02:28 PM
jOuey: Nice painterly approach!Nice!

Derricksong: Great start man,nice lines.

Started cleaning my lines and took my idea a bit further.
http://www.remkotroost.com/forums/turtgeneral2.jpg

DerRoteBaron
02-21-2009, 03:31 PM
Hi this is my first post, here are the concept. I am working on outfit and color placement right now. Good luck to everyone and have a lot fun! May the Cg win!

Concept
http://sites.google.com/site/milosupload/Home/General_Storm.jpg

Portrait
http://sites.google.com/site/milosupload/portrait/General_Storm_Portrait.jpg

Nikolay
02-21-2009, 03:33 PM
Great stuff everyone! Good luck to you all!
I'd start too)

DerrickSong
02-21-2009, 04:01 PM
OKMER, thanks, i like ur concept design too!

This is what i have so far, start on the base color..., as i know the dateline is on March 2nd 11:59pm Eastern Time, however i m not sure how it counting ( according to my local time, now is 22 Feb 1:04am ), thanks!

http://i96.photobucket.com/albums/l180/derrick_song/DW4/mini_challenge1_colour3.jpg

Klocjusz
02-21-2009, 04:18 PM
Hey all!
Here's my general, orc or some other kind of tribal. stage 1:

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/3392/beznazwy1.jpg

Klocjusz
02-21-2009, 04:20 PM
Hey all! Here'a my general, orc or some other kind of tribal:

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/3392/beznazwy1.jpg

sylverleaf
02-21-2009, 04:46 PM
WIP update~ :)

Really not sure about the design of gears. Still feeling not coooool enough!
OKMER, I like your general very much, very creative.


http://features.cgsociety.org/newgallerycrits/g94/362794/362794_1235232398_submedium.jpg

saint-max
02-21-2009, 05:32 PM
HI all :D
we got some really great pieces here :D . here is my first draft just to make sure that am counted in the challenge :P

Klocjusz
02-21-2009, 05:34 PM
Hi all!, Here's mine:
http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/6834/beznazwy1o.jpg

BadgerPirate
02-21-2009, 05:56 PM
http://i280.photobucket.com/albums/kk180/BadgerPirate/War_General_Armadon_Cho.jpg Some nice stuff in here, here's my entry WIP.

rawwad
02-21-2009, 05:57 PM
to Walrus: Thanks Mike, and good point, my idea should go somewhere around General Grievous for example, not so many decoratives stuff, but more focused on charizma. I just make first general which came to my mind (:
I don´t see your one, where you hiding it? :)

OKMER and jOuey like your generals, fantastic ideas.

Ajenyon
02-21-2009, 06:18 PM
Here's a first idea - it's surprisingly hard to get a 'tribal' looking general, but that was what I was going for. He kept looking either completely crazy, or like a shaman. Verging on the 'shamanistic' territory at the moment.

http://www.aj-concepts.net/internet_uploads/general_v03.jpg

Klocjusz
02-21-2009, 06:52 PM
Ok, some update:
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/9628/beznazwy1kopia.jpg

FrozenSceptre
02-21-2009, 07:13 PM
here is mine...
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i271/DAP1228/DW4/WIP_Gen_1.png

BaronImpossible
02-21-2009, 07:20 PM
Sometimes I wish I knew what DW was all about... :)

Nikolay
02-21-2009, 07:29 PM
So, let's continue:)

GaeasHerald
02-21-2009, 08:36 PM
Lets go to war mates! Amazing work so far, well done. Here's my initial sketch:

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm110/gaeasherald/sketchdwmini.jpg

Good luck everybody!

Novbert
02-21-2009, 10:47 PM
so many great entries here!

Here goes my first wip:

http://kepfeltoltes.hu/view/090222/general3_001_copy_www.kepfeltoltes.hu_.jpghttp://kepfeltoltes.hu/090222/general3_001_copy_www.kepfeltoltes.hu_.jpg
(http://kepfeltoltes.hu/view/090222/general3_001_copy_www.kepfeltoltes.hu_.jpg)

CharlesVarenne
02-21-2009, 11:03 PM
An other update. Nice work going on here. :cool:
OKMER really like the last update of your General. Nice details, and general shape.

http://www.charlesvarenne.com/Images/Drawings/General01_03.jpg

Gatlingg
02-21-2009, 11:15 PM
Damn, some amazingly good entries so far. I'm hungry for a win for CGS, damnit! Good luck to everyone.

Update time: victorian/mechani-something themed
"Why does she always have that vacant expression after the standard is raised?"
"Look man, I tried asking her directly once. If you have a lust for fat lips and triple mess duty, you can try to ask her your damn self."
http://krhart.com//DWIV/General_Llanii_Clean.jpg

ShogunWarrior
02-22-2009, 12:08 AM
Hello all, this is my submission entry to DW IV... His name is, Commander Raikbor... He controls an army of legions to his victories.. He is highly respected as a true Warrior and leader. His planet is far from a distant galaxy called, Mythian. And his race is called, Tyrannosa. Its just a quick sketch of what I will accomplish later on.. really good entries here.. good luck to everyone!!

http://inhouseal.com/dw/gen.jpg

Airflow
02-22-2009, 12:15 AM
Airflow - I really like the flow of the design you've put in, but I'm concnerned how it will be judged in regard to "Portraits". There's a ton of potential for it, but it might not be judged well if there's too much emphasis on an action scene. Try moving the concept more toward a tradiitional sitting portrait to fit better with the concept criteria.



http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l295/airflowzero/GeneralCoruBann01.jpg?t=1235268596


Thanks, Ive changed the backround, it now looks like an old 16th century portrait.

Nox
02-22-2009, 01:12 AM
Hope everyone has fun, Good Luck! :bounce:

stridiggio
02-22-2009, 02:04 AM
Cool Generals!!
I like play in this team, my concept is in progress but this is what I've been doing today:

http://i652.photobucket.com/albums/uu249/stridiggiostuffs/nop168.jpg
bad internet conection :(

JonathanLin
02-22-2009, 03:01 AM
Hello everyone! This is my first post on CG Society! :wavey: w00

Anyway this is my concept in progress.
The character is going to be cluttered with bones / artifacts of slain beast & enemies etc.
And he has sharp talon-like-metal-hand-glove-things (I don't know the proper term for those).

http://i710.photobucket.com/albums/ww106/toilet_bear/dominancewar4_2.jpg

Any thoughts?

My god sorry this picture is so big. How do I format them smaller?
And yes that is like a weird dog skull on his head.

Gatlingg
02-22-2009, 04:42 AM
JonathanLin wooo thats awesome. Like a maniacal shaman. :D

felicitymoore
02-22-2009, 06:19 AM
Heyo everyone,

Very nice work being posted! This is my first DW, sketch up tomorrow...
I'm really looking forward to taking part in this!

ChaosShannon
02-22-2009, 06:25 AM
Hi I'm a new member and I was wondering how do i post my work for the DWIV Challenge without inserting an image on this post?

Ferx
02-22-2009, 07:43 AM
Hey!! great great works, awesome entries for sure! :D Time to join the best team!! yeaaa!

Remko - really cool start, like a lot the integration of the devices with the flesh (but missing the beer can :D) Cheers!!

Tibor - The blue backlighting is an amazing touch for your portrait!! Cool! :D

Kelley - Love the eyes and te expression of the girl! :)

Everyone are making great sketches!


Ok, my first concept and WIP :D


http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg211/Ferx_images/General_FPS_DWIV_01.jpg

jOuey
02-22-2009, 07:49 AM
step 6
working details
http://www.waart.net/ftp/contest/knight_commander_wip6.jpg

Nikolay
02-22-2009, 08:27 AM
Some more datails.
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/7582/dwivmini1generalportrai.jpg
http://img134.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dwivmini1generalportrai.jpg

ChaosShannon
02-22-2009, 08:28 AM
I have a question how do you submit work without inserting the image?

saint-max
02-22-2009, 08:54 AM
Nikolay great work loved the white gold feel in it :D

Nikolay
02-22-2009, 09:13 AM
Thanks saint-max! how going, your sketch? where update?) your color theme is very interesting.

Crix Dorius
02-22-2009, 11:01 AM
Ok... this will be my contribution for this challenge.

Still WIP... but I like it so far. :D

General Hagedorn

http://i710.photobucket.com/albums/ww101/CrixDorius/Phase-003.jpg

DoomedSeraph
02-22-2009, 11:34 AM
Loving the work so far in here, Especially Gatlingg. Gonna have a bash at this myself today, see how it goes.

NavigatorJones
02-22-2009, 12:32 PM
Looks good Crix, though one crit i would make is that his shoulders seem a little too narrow, given his head size. I really like how you did the scars over his eye though xD

GaeasHerald
02-22-2009, 01:17 PM
Man, this is moving fast!

Ferx: Nice to see you here mate. Great start!
Nikolay: Wow, neat work!
Gatlingg: can´t wait to see your entry fully colored!

Here´s my progress so far.... "General Double Standards"

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm110/gaeasherald/double-standard.jpg

paddflask
02-22-2009, 02:01 PM
so, some more progress on my piece.

jOuey: Really like your knight
Nikolay: Nice concept, reminds me of the latest planet of the apes movie.

and great start so far everybody! ;)

gafana
02-22-2009, 02:09 PM
Hello everyone,

Here is my General. I decided to rely once again on a human race.
He is a general of an elite squad of formal imperial guards. That's it for now. Good luck to everyone.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v634/gafana/DWIV/DW_001.jpg

cylstudio81
02-22-2009, 02:11 PM
My first attempt, might become something else as I go along...http://fc89.deviantart.com/fs40/f/2009/053/3/f/3f75e8d10153bdb39979075de537ac83.jpg

yakonusuke
02-22-2009, 02:18 PM
Okmer: Really nice so far!


Still searching...

http://mokiji.de/mokiji/230441.ea2e3932a9aac8692ba6af317d9bfd9f.jpg

BaronImpossible
02-22-2009, 03:29 PM
OK, still no real idea how this works but decided to give it a go. Here are my first 3 WIPs. Don't know who this guy is or indeed if he's a good general, but one thing for sure, you'd think twice before disobeying his orders

WIP 1
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/5379/general01.jpg
WIP 2
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/2276/general02.jpg

WIP 3
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/5665/general03.jpg

BaronImpossible
02-22-2009, 04:27 PM
Another cup-of-tea's worth of WIP...

WIP 4
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/1848/general04.jpg

paddflask
02-22-2009, 04:31 PM
some more progress..

BadgerPirate
02-22-2009, 04:55 PM
WIP2

http://i280.photobucket.com/albums/kk180/BadgerPirate/War_General_Armadon_Cho_color_phase.jpg

j4Q
02-22-2009, 05:48 PM
sketch/wip
http://www.sekocin.pl/kuba/lestat2.jpg
http://www.sekocin.pl/kuba/lestat1.jpg
I present to You general Lestat. Inspiration tune for it was my dog, doberman and recently read comic book "Blaksad". Uniform will be based on those worn by polish soldiers during WW II
I need to work to make it more pathetic...

NH
02-22-2009, 06:14 PM
Hello, I finally decided to change a lot of stuff on my character. I kept some elements of the first one and tried to devolop an other kind of war lord... more aged, more experienced... I hope this works better :)
I'll keep the roman/greek style anyway, I like this "glorious" effect related to this theme. I'll probably associate this to some advanced technology, maybe some forgotten Atlantian stuff.

Crits are always welcome.

May the force be with all of you

NH
02-22-2009, 06:17 PM
NH: Looking good! It’s got and original face I would try and keep the same concept for the body…les human. I also think you could give him more authority bay changing the look in his eyes and general countenance (the same goes for my monkey…ha!)


thx for the advises mate :)

@ NavigatorJones : thx for your suport :)

@Okmer: How are you doin' mate? It's cool to see you there :) Your art is so cool dude ! Que la force soit avec toi !:beer:

CharlesVarenne
02-22-2009, 06:18 PM
New WIP
Found a name: General Eyce.
A simple word play for ice and eye, because of his dead eye and scary prosthesis.
He lives in a world which is like 18th century mix with steam punk and fantasy:
( Cavalry,canon but also some kind of steam machine, dwarf, elves... and a bit of very high tech).

I start creating a little story about him.
This picture is his last portrait before his death. A couple of hours later he will die in a quite stupid way by falling off his horse. A shell fell not very far from him scaring his horse. A bit of a lame death for a general victorious on many battlefields.

http://www.charlesvarenne.com/Images/Drawings/General01_06.jpg

stridiggio
02-22-2009, 06:18 PM
Great progress.
BaronImpossible: Uh, you are right he is stronger...

WIP.2. walking around:
http://i652.photobucket.com/albums/uu249/stridiggiostuffs/Imagen6.jpg

NH
02-22-2009, 06:33 PM
Ok this is some values and light study on my character...
This is my first DominanceWar challenge and I am wondering about the cgs colors... are we supposed to use only these???
Thanx for any helpful answer :)

EarVant
02-22-2009, 07:08 PM
Here's my 1st post to DW VI or any CG up till now... So i'm new here. Tips and tricks, C&C are most definately welcome...

WIP...

http://www.publicdisplay.be/05.jpg

Nikolay
02-22-2009, 07:11 PM
Wow, how much updates.
BaronImpossible>> Very good general! GaeasHerald>> thanks) your general very creative!

Everybody great stuff i look!

so, some my progress.
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/7582/dwivmini1generalportrai.jpg

DeadInTheAttic
02-22-2009, 07:16 PM
But I think, I like this.
Since Dune was such a big impression, I use this contest to illustrate one of it's main characters. Vorian Atreides, founder of house Atreides, leader of the human assault fleet.

WildBrew
02-22-2009, 07:18 PM
Hi all! My first sketch of the general. Not sure about his name yet. Something like "Feras Consumere Nati IV"
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/9313/generalportrait.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

BaronImpossible
02-22-2009, 07:51 PM
Well, that's it for today. Taken about 4 plays of "Years of Refusal" so far which is what? Three or four hours?

Nikolay - love that regal look, very apt for a general. Yours is going to turn out well.

WIP 5
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/140/general05.jpg

Nox
02-22-2009, 08:02 PM
Hi All,

Here is my basic concept Futuristic General, gunna make some basic changes to the look but for now this is my core look.

http://www.thetecheng.com/dominance/general.jpg

I like what BaronImpossible is up to.

Gatlingg
02-22-2009, 08:09 PM
Baron and Nikolay - I am WOW'd Such awesome personalities. Nikolay, that cream color makes me super happy.

Can we post Screencapped WIPS? Use approach like my traditional meth.

http://krhart.com/DWIV/close_up_sc1.jpg

Ajenyon
02-22-2009, 08:25 PM
New version - much happier with where this is going.

http://www.aj-concepts.net/internet_uploads/general_04_04.jpg

Nice work in this thread -

@baronimpossible - great pic. He doesn't look like a general yet, though - more of a cook or squad leader from hell. More gold braid!

jushra
02-22-2009, 08:27 PM
Here's the pencil sketch for my entry. I pulled some reference from various sources and came up with this. I want to go for a classical portrait look, but I want to see what kind of fun can be had with the armor.

EarVant
02-22-2009, 08:32 PM
Quick Update - thought the previous version looked too 'rabit'... too aggressive. So I toned it towards something more 'regal'.

http://www.publicdisplay.be/06.jpg

ChaosShannon
02-22-2009, 08:41 PM
I'm the new guy, and here is the start my General Portrait
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3499/3301699712_7520302ddc.jpg

geikou
02-22-2009, 08:57 PM
I did DW3 last year and really enjoyed it, so I hope I can make it through DW4 this year. Thought I'd give this mini-challenge a try. Let's see if I can finish this in time. ^^;

She is considered the loveliest woman in China of her time, and her beauty is matched only by her strategic and tactical genius. Haven't come up with a name yet.

http://s23.photobucket.com/albums/b384/geikou/dw4minichallenge1_wip1.jpg

Phill99
02-22-2009, 09:09 PM
Oh yeah, Phill, the cigar in your dude's mouth is total win :buttrock:
Thanks a lot buddy!

Gatlingg: Great looking general, love the line work

OKMER: Very cool concept, that mouth piece looks awsome!!

Derrik: Cool general! he looks very menacing

Nikolay: I love the concept and the colors!

BaronImpossible: Very nice painting dude

Here's an update of my general, just working on the red armor.

splintercannon
02-22-2009, 09:21 PM
This sounds like too much fun. I would've done it last year but I didn't see that you could do a 2d concept until about a week before the end of the contest and I didn't want to rush and make something of low quality. THIS YEAR!!!

Here's my general. Question: why does every general look so stern???
http://i263.photobucket.com/albums/ii152/splintercannon/general_protrait.jpg

ShogunWarrior
02-22-2009, 09:25 PM
Here is my updated job on Commander Raikbor.. Hes halfway to finish but i still have to do his armor and detailing..

http://inhouseal.com/dw/General1.jpg

http://inhouseal.com/dw/General2.jpg

http://inhouseal.com/dw/General3.jpg

http://inhouseal.com/dw/General4.jpg

http://inhouseal.com/dw/General5.jpg

http://inhouseal.com/dw/General6.jpg

Rupy
02-22-2009, 09:27 PM
I am new to dominance war and really looking forward to everyones portraits. Seen some really nice peices so far, looking good everyone. I decieded to a mayan/aztec theme, and wanted to try to a hybrid between human and jaguar, since jaguar is a significant animal during those times.

Cheers

Rupy

http://www.roopbhogal.com/jag.jpg

DeadInTheAttic
02-22-2009, 09:30 PM
Hair and tuning of the details will follow.
And still no idea of a background. But ... sooner or later ...

Novbert
02-22-2009, 09:31 PM
Many hours of work and still many things to fix and to work on

http://kepfeltoltes.hu/090222/general3_003_copy_www.kepfeltoltes.hu_.jpg

madbot
02-22-2009, 09:43 PM
Okay here's a colour update. I know I haven't used the CGsociety colours yet, but I hope to use them on his breathing apparatus. I feel I've been too careful so far, so I'm going to mess it up and see where it takes me.

http://forums.cgsociety.org/attachment.php?attachmentid=138489

Really enjoying the quality of work so far -
I love the designs from Rawwad, Gatlingg and Okmer to name a few.
Also great start cylstudio81, that's a general no one would mess with!

Phill99
02-22-2009, 10:02 PM
WOW, Rupy very intense character! I love it. Can't wait to see more updates.

NH
02-22-2009, 10:06 PM
color and texture test :)

felicitymoore
02-22-2009, 10:54 PM
Wow, more nice work! You guys are doing great :p

My wips so far - General Gazan was a real General in the Nepoleonic Wars, I'm thinking about trying to develop a more updated version with some modern elements, so far I'm still approaching the traditional portrait. I'm contemplating a robot/human style, but this is my first attempts at characters so I'm a little uncertain how it'll go ;)
If anyone's got a bit of time for crits that would be fantastic!
Thank you.

Sleeter
02-22-2009, 11:39 PM
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa1/sleeter23/DW_Preliminary.jpg

darkknight
02-22-2009, 11:49 PM
Hey guys,

Thought I'd post the beginning of my portrait design for the mini challenge. Trying to reach something that is a cross between Samual Aleksandrovich and Dr. Alkad Mzu if anyone has read the Night Dawn trilogy. Good luck all!

Thank,

darkknight

http://www.hungrypixel.co.uk/sites/default/files/imagepicker/e/edpulis/thumbs/general_sketch.jpg

http://www.hungrypixel.co.uk/node/83
http://forums.cgsociety.org/attachment.php?attachmentid=138496&stc=1

NavigatorJones
02-22-2009, 11:52 PM
I have a question regarding the colour pallet. It seems that some of us aren't using it at all, and some are sticking to it strictly. Is it very important to stick to it exactly or is it like, we can pick one colour from it to display, and disregard the rest? Or is it optional whether we use it at all? Because the rules said to use it, but now I'm not so sure?? :shrug:

yakonusuke
02-23-2009, 12:13 AM
Baronimpossible: Nice character you have there!

http://mokiji.de/mokiji/230696.df78bfebf28a4d274faf65e3f5edc589.jpg

GaeasHerald
02-23-2009, 12:15 AM
ShogunWarrior: hey, the facial details on your general are terrific! But be careful not to get lost in detailing just yet, cause the clock is ticking!

Felicity: both sketches look great. I say go for the robot style all the way!

NavigatorJones: I think you can use the logo or/and colors... not really sure...


OK, another wip:

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm110/gaeasherald/sketch-dwmini-2.jpg

stridiggio
02-23-2009, 12:33 AM
NavigatorJones: The colors are just for the Team War Logo,.

http://i652.photobucket.com/albums/uu249/stridiggiostuffs/Imagen7.jpg

Option A or B :D ... :hmm:

Tedskis
02-23-2009, 12:40 AM
Good luck everyone!!!

feyshtey
02-23-2009, 12:48 AM
Everyone's submissions just keep getting more and impressive! I'm really enjoying watching them all develop.

Here's a WIP on mine. Got some color started, and working out the composition a little more.
http://fc83.deviantart.com/fs40/f/2009/053/c/8/General___concept_by_Feyshtey.jpg

paperclip
02-23-2009, 01:27 AM
Some really beautiful things here. I'm kind of ashamed posting this here now, but I don't have my wacom with me, so I made do with a mouse for the time being. This is more of a placeholder than anything else- I really like this topic!

http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i58/clippy06/dom-2.jpg

Instead of medals, this guy has bows and small coins, his hat will be made out of burlap with pine needles stuck in it and a pine cone to top things off...he's nature's general. I thought it was kind of funny, anyway... :D

jamihn
02-23-2009, 01:55 AM
CGSociety represent! What! Looking good team!

This is pretty rough, but I wanted to go with a classic composition, like one of those Presidential or Civil War portraits.

http://www.jamihn.com/wip/dwGeneral01.jpg

ik_po
02-23-2009, 02:38 AM
My first concept , Forest General
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3573/3301880849_0707fb16f9.jpg?v=0

splintercannon
02-23-2009, 03:11 AM
Laying down the base values. Time for some shadows!

http://i263.photobucket.com/albums/ii152/splintercannon/general_protrait1.jpg

jamihn
02-23-2009, 03:12 AM
More blocking in of values. Kinda want to do some organic bone spikey things but I haven't settled quite yet.

http://www.jamihn.com/wip/dwGeneral02.jpg

Airflow
02-23-2009, 03:51 AM
BaronImpossible and jamihn, really great work. These two are astounding.
And lots of others are progressing really quickly.

Latest update
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l295/airflowzero/GeneralCoruBann03.jpg

feyshtey
02-23-2009, 05:04 AM
Another WIP... Plodding along...
http://fc17.deviantart.com/fs40/f/2009/053/9/e/Dominance_War_IV___WIP_3__by_Feyshtey.jpg

ChaosShannon
02-23-2009, 05:24 AM
This is a example of how I might lay down the color
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3560/3302289883_d9bd36c847.jpg

conor
02-23-2009, 05:24 AM
OKmer--- great design , can't wait to see more!

Gatlingg----this is other design that inspired me alot, great line work, and great drawing. Am sure the painting will be great.

Nikolay--- What can i say, you have a very good design , it looks flawless and i think your the first one to finish.

Baronimposible-- i always like your paintings and this one is just the same. Great expression and a very scary general.

Hi people, i lot of good entries so far. This is my first entry in the series. This is a medieval general , (if you see him caming , better run and hide). I just posted the initial design and sketch , the pose will change. All C&C are very welcome!!

jamihn
02-23-2009, 05:25 AM
Starting to lock down some of the design elements.

http://www.jamihn.com/wip/dwGeneral03.jpg

Tedskis
02-23-2009, 06:03 AM
this is where i am at.

DerrickSong
02-23-2009, 07:11 AM
Nikolay- very fast process, and your general's helmet look cool, i like the design.

Gatlingg - wah man, you can handle those fine details! nice work!

BaronImpossible - your general look fierce and color rendering is really good, i like the color pallete!

jamihn - nice start on the your female general, it should turn out to be good!

Tedskis - i like your concept with those cube come out from his brain

A lot of good entries appear in this thread, glad to see that! We should keep it up!


Here is my update,

http://i96.photobucket.com/albums/l180/derrick_song/DW4/mini_challenge1_colour6.jpg

killermachine
02-23-2009, 07:21 AM
ok starting my entry..1 day at alchemy and i come up with this
http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c252/killermachinez/Alchemy-2009-02-22-11-50-33-4.jpg

gafana
02-23-2009, 07:50 AM
Some progress :)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v634/gafana/DWIV/DW_001_1.jpg

felicitymoore
02-23-2009, 07:56 AM
I don't have my wacom with me, so I made do with a mouse for the time being.

You did this with a mouse! :bowdown: That is a very cool image - I love it! really nice.

Thanks for the comment, GaeasHerald, General DoubleStandards - looking good too, clever idea!

Wow this thread is awesome, :applause:

BluntPencil
02-23-2009, 07:56 AM
Some awesome designs in here so far. Keep it going, guys. :D

JamrozGary
02-23-2009, 08:24 AM
hi all

one of my entry...
my purpose was to show a 12 years old general...a little bit demoniac...a bit just lol.
i think a very young general is more disturbing taht an old one.
don't know if i will finsih this one...some guys told that he remind they mister bison from Stret figther -in france his name is bison) but it wasnt what i have wanted...and even more, I DONT LIKE Street fighter...
so what do U think about this?
should I ending this one or doing another one?

http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t105/laanrohs/generals.jpg

Jhaeffner
02-23-2009, 08:26 AM
Scanned pencil sketch. Digital Work comin up next.
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee127/LogosTekhne/GenRogan.jpg

Crix Dorius
02-23-2009, 08:50 AM
Here a little update

http://i710.photobucket.com/albums/ww101/CrixDorius/Phase-004.jpg

paperclip
02-23-2009, 09:39 AM
Looking good, Jamroz! Maybe make it a bit more of a view from beneath, so we're looking up at this terrifying general...only to see that he's twelve years old? Just a thought...

Jamihn, very cool! Tons of potential in there, looking forward to seeing it finished...

Another little update. Still wacomless....I'm going back to it tonight, though!

http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i58/clippy06/dom-3.jpg

FrozenSceptre
02-23-2009, 09:46 AM
Here is an update of my general...
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i271/DAP1228/DW4/WIP_Gen_2.png

DoomedSeraph
02-23-2009, 10:12 AM
Did this yesterday but I'm not really "feeling it". Might have another bash later in the week.

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l50/DoomedSeraph/DW4portraitasscopy.jpg

NR43
02-23-2009, 10:28 AM
Oumph I'm dizzy... so much awesomeness here!
No time to participate but I'll sure follow this thread

REKLAS
02-23-2009, 10:34 AM
Update 02:
http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/9783/wargeneralwip003.jpg

This thread just keeps getting better and better each day, lots of good stuff in here keep it up guys. CGSociety all the way!

NH
02-23-2009, 01:07 PM
Hello :) Here's a new update.
Crits and comments R welcome.
Amazing stuff is coming to life on this thread ! Keep it up mates.

OKMER
02-23-2009, 01:30 PM
J4Q:Yeah great stuff man!Makes think a bit of Scooby.Neat stuff ,keep m coming!

Nikolay: Beautiful & epic feeling about it!More!lol.Good luck man!

Nox: Nice start.The logo behind, that bright, disturbs the eye a bit while he travels on the pic I think.

Gathling: love that jewel.

Cylstudio: yeah nice Dark feeling man!Cool, nice start.

Shogunwarrior: That starts out neat man!Want more!:-)

Novbert!Great strange start!Good luck!

BAronimpossible:Topnotch painting as usual man!

NH: Nabil, great to see you in too man!Like your work 2 man!Yeahaaa!Nice start!

Yakonusuke: Hey impressive man_Great start.

Jamihn: yeh, she seems angry man_War_Nice start:)

GaeasHerald: Nice start & creative ideas man.Their arms seems a bit short, maybe some chains and stuff could bring in even more dynamics

Stridiggio: Yeahhh Looking forward to your next steps man.Feels really strange.Cool!

Feyshtey: Sexy man!Keep m coming

Paperclip: Ronfll!!Yeaaaah theresa!Nice to see you're in.Paperclip style!Love your idea about a nature general!

Jamihn: More man!more,haha, good luck man

Ik_po: Nice creepy start man.Good luck

Splintercannon: Creepy man!Keep m coming

Airflow:!HI Robert!Starts out freat man!Like the head that's starting to pop out.Nice colors!Good luck bro!

ChaosShannon: Ying YAng stymle man!lol.Good luck!

Derricksong: Yo, starting to look neat man!More!:-)

Killermachine: Do I got to say what I see in there?Are you analysing me?:-)Looking forward to see what you'll do with it further on.Good luck!

Gafana: Keep m coming man.MAybe try more different materials on his suit?Just a thought ofcourse.Good luck man!

JAmrozGary:Yeah nice creepy idea man.Neat!

Jhaeffer: Nice lines & start.Good luck!

Cris Dorius.Nice start.Got a bit of the 80's sf feeling about it.Like that.Good luck!

Frozensceptre: hi Marcus, want More!lol!Keep m coming!Good luck man

DoomedSeraph: Nice strokes anyway man.Good luck!

REKLAS: Nice update!Curious about what's following.

NH: yeah cool man.Nice pastelish colors.

Heres a little update.Still very rough.Doing some research on lightning & stuff.
C&C very welcom
http://www.remkotroost.com/forums/turtgeneral3.jpg

g3p
02-23-2009, 02:00 PM
Hi, Folks.

My first DW and my first contribution for this mini challenger.
I make 2 drafts and trust in second draft, but I like first draft to.

http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_kk4CPOihirc/SaK5kERATcI/AAAAAAAAAMk/q-qIL8hD6Uc/s1600-h/wip00.png

if you can't view the imagem, try:
http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_kk4CPOihirc/SaK5kERATcI/AAAAAAAAAMk/q-qIL8hD6Uc/s1600-h/wip00.png

killermachine
02-23-2009, 02:05 PM
OKMER: ur general is coming out reeaaal sweet so far,loving the approach.i started mine lik that on purpose so as to create an idea that i would not be able to create otherwise :)

new update on my version..still experimenting alot on this..

http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c252/killermachinez/generalwip2.jpg

thanks for C&c
Tc
KM

cylstudio81
02-23-2009, 02:36 PM
still going, still making changes... http://fc30.deviantart.com/fs41/f/2009/054/0/f/0f27874390b7057cfee50a12171ea0d5.jpg

marcomaxbonaria
02-23-2009, 02:59 PM
C&C welcome, just the start, go team cg!

DeadInTheAttic
02-23-2009, 03:55 PM
Wow! Astonishing works in here.One even looks more like an emperor than just a general.






http://features.cgsociety.org/newgallerycrits/g10/365210/365210_1235411037_large.jpg

Tedskis
02-23-2009, 03:58 PM
d4 is my first time posting on cgsociety, and for the life of me i cant figure out how to post pictures of my general wip without it showing up as a thumnail.

I have been uploading jpg's using the "attach files> manage attachments" link below. is there another way?

DoomedSeraph
02-23-2009, 04:10 PM
Loving the mass post OKMER, thanks for your comment. Still astonished and inspired by all the work flying around in here. Amazing stuff!

... Now if only I could do something that's even in the same book as these images, let alone on the same page!

EjcBlue3
02-23-2009, 04:14 PM
http://ejcblue3.cgsociety.org/gallery/733682/Here is my WIP for DW4.http://ejcblue3.cgsociety.org/gallery/733682/

feyshtey
02-23-2009, 04:19 PM
d4 is my first time posting on cgsociety, and for the life of me i cant figure out how to post pictures of my general wip without it showing up as a thumnail.

I have been uploading jpg's using the "attach files> manage attachments" link below. is there another way?

Unfortunately you can't upload an image as a post insert directly. That's why you're getting the thumbnails. If you want it to show up as an imbedded image, you have to link to it from another hosting locaation (deviantart, imageshack, etc.)


--


Work blocks some image hosting sites, so I can comment on some of the work here right now. But from what I can see we've got a REALLY strong showing so far.

Teskis - Very original concept. I'm anxious to see where this one goes.

Jamihn - This has a ton of potential, and I can't wait to see the light and color develop.

IK-Po - Great character design.

Jushra - I really like this one. Great drawing skill!

ShogunWarrior - Your WIP series is great. It's always fun to see so many increments in a talented artist's process. I was skeptical of this design originally, but the detail you're putting in makes it work!

Rury - I love this character. I hope you're able to really push the details.

J4Q - The first thing that popped into my head on the top left image (low-angle Doby), was an old WWII propoganda poster. I'd love to see that fleshed out! Great concept.

Nikolay - This is absolutely fantastic. Really. Somehow you've succesfully combined Maxfield Parrish and StarWars. (Don't take that as insult, I love em both!)

BarronImpossible - Far and away the best 'painterly' submission. This is a great piece.

Gatlingg - Holy Crap. Again. The detail you're putting into this is certainly setting the bar (still). This is on it's way to front page plug.

Ajenyon - The light in this along with the aged character is wonderful. Can't wait to see more.

Okmer - This is another one that I was skeptical about originally, but the more you develop it the more I'm sold on it. Great work!

Rawwad - We want updates!

varunbondwal
02-23-2009, 04:45 PM
Here's my initial entry, imported a pencil sketch and just started working on it. http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/8476/general1.jpg
http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_85jx8MAMckI/SaLhGxgT2_I/AAAAAAAAA18/DWAKqs3ztfw/s1600-h/general1.jpghttp://3.bp.blogspot.com/_85jx8MAMckI/SaLhGxgT2_I/AAAAAAAAA18/DWAKqs3ztfw/s1600-h/general1.jpghttp://3.bp.blogspot.com/_85jx8MAMckI/SaLhGxgT2_I/AAAAAAAAA18/DWAKqs3ztfw/s1600-h/general1.jpg

BluntPencil
02-23-2009, 04:48 PM
Started all over when a friend pointed out that WoW had Walrus-men in it, so figured I'd best do something else. Luckily, I like my new result much better. :D

http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h100/Sentallia/DW4/general5.jpg

Loving what I'm seeing, folks! Keep 'em coming!

splintercannon
02-23-2009, 05:03 PM
Moving along!

http://i263.photobucket.com/albums/ii152/splintercannon/general_protrait2.jpg

DeadInTheAttic
02-23-2009, 05:09 PM
d4 is my first time posting on cgsociety, and for the life of me i cant figure out how to post pictures of my general wip without it showing up as a thumnail.

I have been uploading jpg's using the "attach files> manage attachments" link below. is there another way?

I tried it, too.
And if you have uploaded an image somewhere, you can upload it by using the "Message"-window when entering a post. There you can not only edit you text but also insert your image by using the icon in the Message-Menu-bar which looks like mountains, yellow coloured. Just inserting html won't work.

Tedskis
02-23-2009, 05:10 PM
thanks, i wasnt sure if having a link to a pic on a different site was breaking any rules.

VHASE
02-23-2009, 05:15 PM
Giving this thing a try. Progress is pretty rapid and enjoyable right now.

current stage:
http://www.bv-design.com/cgtalk/wip01.jpg

Progress in detail:
http://www.bv-design.com/cgtalk/wip01-stages.jpg

OnyxAmphiptere
02-23-2009, 05:18 PM
This will be a rather tight week as I don't even have the upcoming weekend to work on this but what the hey - why not. It's good to have the Wars ongoing again =)

Here's my first rough...

http://www.onyxamphiptere.com/Webcontent/ImageStore/GB_DWIV_MiniPort001.jpg

Megoru
02-23-2009, 05:18 PM
There's already some nice piece of art in this topic, keep up the good work guys!
I had to use a little 3d to help me out with proportion, especially the "musculata" armor.
I'll have to work on the pose and the head looks really ugly the way it is right now, but this wip contains nearly everything you got to know on who General Leonard Law is.

http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/7444/wip1.th.jpg (http://img515.imageshack.us/my.php?image=wip1.jpg)

DeadInTheAttic
02-23-2009, 05:20 PM
thanks, i wasnt sure if having a link to a pic on a different site was breaking any rules.

I think, unless it is the final image, it won't break the rules. It's just more like a sketch. If I remember, there is a link on the first page of this thread, which can be used for final cg-submissions. And afterwards one can decide to upload it to the contest.

But ... I am new to this, too. Try and error :D

yakonusuke
02-23-2009, 05:22 PM
BluntPencil: yeah , I think this goes in a more interesting direction. Original design. Like it!

DeadInTheAttic: What he's crying at? :)

cylstudio81: Looks interesting, curious bout the next steps.

Okmer: I like the left lighting! I had something like that in mind too. The general in front of a lit table or holomap or something.

Good luck to all of you guys! Keep it coming.



The hands are crap... I guess I need reference for that.
Some more trinkets and bone/tooth thingys will follow.


http://mokiji.de/mokiji/231119.2dbce5193ee07a45deee3efe2a13ad01.jpg

Shadow Seraph
02-23-2009, 05:55 PM
I just want to say great job to everyone so far. I'm really loving the variety I'm seeing. I'll be putting my own early WIP up here tonight hopefully. I'm going with a seductive yet evil female general, whose responsibility would be leading one of hell's armies in the end of world struggle for souls, hoping to trap the eyes and spirits of men.

Until then... KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!

NH
02-23-2009, 06:11 PM
Hello, here is my new update.
Vhase : your general is cooool !
Keep it up guys this thread is full of stunning stuff !!!

OKMER
02-23-2009, 06:15 PM
Blocking in my first colors, but not so happy about it finaly.I'll proberly head for the first lightning.
C & C very welcome
http://www.remkotroost.com/forums/turtgeneral4.jpg

NH
02-23-2009, 06:22 PM
Remko that's soooo awesome ! I love your palette. More more more !!

Gatlingg
02-23-2009, 06:29 PM
Okmer, why aren't you happy? I mean, its such a unique design and tight concept already without even the tight details.

Yakonusuke... what a big friggen dude and I love that fur texture so far. Definitely wouldn't want to be on the concubine list at all. :D

ik_po
02-23-2009, 06:32 PM
progress in today

http://us.f6.yahoofs.com/hkblog/E87PqDGbGyhYOti2IA--_1/blog/20090224032507433.jpg.jpg?ib_____DvvrPHkJb

http://us.f6.yahoofs.com/hkblog/E87PqDGbGyhYOti2IA--_1/blog/20090224032459769.jpg.jpg?ib_____DPwuQWSBe

BluntPencil
02-23-2009, 06:37 PM
Last one for today. I've more or less decided on starting all over tomorrow and get a more epic pose and layout, but I like his design. Shall definately be using a good deal of it again.

http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h100/Sentallia/DW4/general6.jpg

And @Yakonusuke: I LOVE your guy. :D

DeadInTheAttic
02-23-2009, 06:44 PM
[QUOTE=OKMER]Blocking in my first colors, but not so happy about it finaly.I'll proberly head for the first lightning.
C & C very welcome/QUOTE]


I think, the lighting from below would look better according to the steps before.
Some kind of campfire-look an perhaps something like a monitor or display, greenish or something like that.

BaronImpossible
02-23-2009, 06:59 PM
Some great entries and thanks to everyone for the comments :)

Okmer - nice form but I think light from below might make him more sinister, if that's what you're after. Looking v good though

Nearly done on this. Half an hour tomorrow maybe. No idea what this "team colours" is about so if I've fkd that up then, you know... oh.

WIP 6
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/4130/general06.jpg

jamihn
02-23-2009, 07:03 PM
Wow, so many to catch up on!

BluntPencil - ace design! I really like the vents and the little powdered wig you snuck in there.

OKMER - Yeah man, your general has a great design. Can't wait to see what you do with the uniform. I really like the scale details on his/its scalp.

NH - Love the light coming off the sash and the giant tattoo of the CS logo.

yakonusuke - Your general cuts an imposing figure! Is his right pinky cut off? OUCH! I'd follow him for fear of getting my ass beat.

Megoru - promissing start.

OnyxAmphiptere - Hope you get a chance to finish.

Vhase - Impressive build up. I like the scales and detailing in the face that's emerging.

splintercannon - His eyes are creeping me out! Gives him a lot of personality even in this early stage.

akhenaten - Looks quite imposing. Can't wait to see how he develops.

DeadInTheAttic - Nice texturing on the fabric. And I like the dramatic eye shading.

marcomaxbonaria - I think he can use some more detailing, especially in his uniform. But I like the little smirk he has.

cylstudio81 - Holy crap! That dude is scary as hell! Want more!

killermachine - I really like the features of his face. He's got a pompous air about him.


Oh my god, there's too many! I'm sorry if I missed anyone, but this thread is growing by the minute. The work here is very inspiring. Makes me want to push mine even further.

jamihn
02-23-2009, 07:04 PM
BaronImpossible - YES! His expression is just freaking perfect. And I love the technique. Definitely one of my faves so far.

Ferx
02-23-2009, 07:05 PM
BaronImpossible - Hey Simon, really cool that you joined to the mini challenge. Really nice portrait, very cool expression on your general

BluntPencil - Great uniform for your character. Cheers!!

GaeasHerald - Hey Gerardo my friend! Really original and interesting concept!! like a lot your idea. Cheers!! :beer:

krishna-fu
02-23-2009, 07:18 PM
ah,see it maybe so later.


it's my begin~

http://i662.photobucket.com/albums/uu350/krishnafu/1.jpg

http://i662.photobucket.com/albums/uu350/krishnafu/top222.jpg

must sleep,tommorow update..

Gatlingg
02-23-2009, 07:33 PM
More steps. Final complete color blocking in. May change on certain things...detail shots and more techniques added later.

I like making hexagon grids and overlaying them for different textures. Also, got rid of the scars, added gray hair, torn ear, and hope to make her look more like 50 than 20 eventually during the painting stage.

Thought of making a primary and auxiliary support system for her suit, possibly with an oxygen saturated liquid or some such thing - that and tertiary and complimentary glows are fun. :3

http://krhart.com/DWIV/general_process_2.jpg

felicitymoore
02-23-2009, 08:40 PM
Hey coming along very nicely Gatlingg :bounce: Your plans for the General sound exciting, can't wait to see more.

Just started color now. I need to refine the General more, maybe add some robot bits I mentioned, I'll have a go and post that later on. This is a great way to tackle things you haven't before - fantastic!

gafana
02-23-2009, 08:55 PM
Okmer thank you for the advise, i hope i can achieve variety.

The second image is whit his force helm on, but it is just an idea. :)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v634/gafana/DWIV/DW_001_2.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v634/gafana/DWIV/DW_001_2H.jpg

stridiggio
02-23-2009, 08:58 PM
wip4. thanks Okmer, nice concept for your General, looking forward for more updates.
http://i652.photobucket.com/albums/uu249/stridiggiostuffs/DW4stridiggio4.jpg

VHASE
02-23-2009, 08:59 PM
I like the generals by BaronImpossible and yakonusuke for their intriguing facial expressions. Adds a lot to the character.

Some more progress:
http://www.bv-design.com/cgtalk/wip02.jpg
stages (http://www.bv-design.com/cgtalk/wip02-stages.jpg)

Ferx
02-23-2009, 09:00 PM
Really nice updates and new entries, great works!

WIP 2

Thinking the need to expand the canvas to add hands for the character :)

http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg211/Ferx_images/General_FPS_DWIV_02.jpg

DerRoteBaron
02-23-2009, 09:17 PM
Hi I finally made some forward movements and here are the VIP.
Regards to all, great generals, keep working cg es!
1 Basic pose (anatomy)
http://sites.google.com/site/milosupload/portrait/Storm_Color_03.jpg
2 Basic pose(with armor)
http://sites.google.com/site/milosupload/Home/Storm_Color_02.jpg

3 And basic pose(with first color pass)
http://sites.google.com/site/milosupload/color/Storm_Color_01.jpg
Milos Milojic

ChaosShannon
02-23-2009, 09:41 PM
I change my general for a Samurai general to a Teutonic General. I think It will come out better in the end. Everyone keep up the good work!http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3501/3305055380_e2237e69ef.jpg

Yone
02-23-2009, 09:47 PM
Oh, it's already monday and it is pretty late here in the UK.



Ok, I have an idea. I'd really like to make a general that someone would be proud of to follow. Someone risen through the ranks, with so many wounds and cyber replacements that there is not much left of the poor man, but a brilliant mind.

This is my first sketch. I've mostly been working on the face of the character and juggling ideas for the uniform. This design is not what I am looking for and I need to design the uniform to be military and ornate.

I'm going to layer Uniform and high tech and to try to keep the eyes and personality.

Any feedback is most welcome.
Back to work :wip:

rhemrev
02-23-2009, 09:48 PM
Cool stuff everyone, it's so cool to see so many different takes! I myself have made a good stat in pencil this evening,I"ll post it somewhere this week!

-Edwin

Art2
02-23-2009, 10:05 PM
Excellent work everyone!
War is brewing and it's exciting to read through this thread :D

BaronImpossible, that is one mean looking general. Excellent work.

Here's my doodle.
As always, I have an idea, but where it will end up, I don't know yet :)

http://www.marlonart.nl/web/DomWarIV/the-General.jpg

Nikolay
02-23-2009, 10:47 PM
Great updates guys!

and im glad see new generals here)

OKMER> Your idea very great. i love datails.

krishna-fu> Cool speedpaint!


my some progress.

http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/7582/dwivmini1generalportrai.jpg

Jsac
02-23-2009, 10:51 PM
:wavey:Hello everybody ! Here's my first post for DW. I'm looking forward for some feedback. So far it's just a sketch, I'm just experimenting with a barbarian looking like general, please feel free to coment.

Remton
02-23-2009, 10:59 PM
Ok, I'll try to follow and participate to this contest... Unless I'm quite busy for now...
This would be a kind of woman cossacks general...

So, here is the first step, base drawing and rough colors (and I'm sorry, I can't give a lot of infos because my english is quite bad :( )

http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/7621/dw4wip01copie.jpg

And cool works on here !
Keep up guys !

Ferx
02-23-2009, 11:08 PM
Hey Remton, cool design, like the dangerous expression for your general :D nice! Cheers!! :beer:

g3p
02-23-2009, 11:11 PM
one more step to my paint.

http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_kk4CPOihirc/SaM6trcLY3I/AAAAAAAAAMs/qdgF9UG3fwc/s1600-h/wip01.png

or try:
http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_kk4CPOihirc/SaM6trcLY3I/AAAAAAAAAMs/qdgF9UG3fwc/s1600-h/wip01.png

GaeasHerald
02-23-2009, 11:47 PM
Gatlingg: Wow, those are some unexpected colors! loving it!

Ferx: Fernando, todo viento? Extending your canvas was a step in the right direction man, really allows you to add more detail and expresion. good job.

VHASE: very, very cool mate. Cheers.

General Okmer Tsoort: Sir, yes, sir! Yep, I was going for underdeveloped arms in one of the demon-halves, but that went horribly wrong....:blush:. Hope this is better:

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm110/gaeasherald/sketch-dwmini-3.jpg


....still gotta add the map ..... ....and skull..... .....and textures....
OMG, I'm never gonna finish in time

Comments and crits are definety welcomed!

Airflow
02-23-2009, 11:56 PM
The cavalry have arrived.

Art2, looking forward to your entry, I know its gonna be slick. :bounce:

OnyxAmphiptere
02-24-2009, 12:09 AM
Everybody's stuff is looking awesome so far! Looking forward to next week to see what comes out of it. Keep it up folks!

On that note - a quick colour rough before I head out for the eve.

I've already identified a good number of things that need to be tweaked or altered already, so will see where the next couple of days take me. I'm still fairly new to the whole painting thing so additional comments or suggestions are appreciated.

http://www.onyxamphiptere.com/Webcontent/ImageStore/GB_DWIV_MiniPort002.jpg

madbot
02-24-2009, 01:27 AM
I had to start over as I was beginning to loath my work. I was happy with the drawing but by using selections for each part of the picture made it look very bland. So I've started again with just the drawing, adding black and white to see where I can go with it.

He currently has a spartan warrior mask on one side so for the time being I've called him General Sotiria. Sotiria means "saviour" in greek.

I'd still like to use some purples and blues to give him a regal look. That would allow the reds and greys in the CGsociety logo to stand out. I've also gone in and started detailing the face.
I would love to hear what people think so far.

Rupy
02-24-2009, 01:44 AM
Everyone's work is looking so good, looking foward to everyones finals, thanks for the comment Phill99 going try to keep that look, your on a good start yourself, looking forward to see where you go with it

Madbot- I know what you meaning, happens to me all the time, but conutine progressing, the one you have going is pretty nice, looking forward to seeing the detials, have fun, cheers!

Amazing work everyone, there are some very inspirational work here,

I have just updated my piece, added some more color, and texture to the character, and a few adjustments

Cheers!

http://www.roopbhogal.com/jag2.jpg

Rupy
roopbhogal.com (http://www.roopbhogal.com/)

AcerB
02-24-2009, 01:56 AM
mmm Hi Everyone!

Just started a design tonight, after work ^^

WIP1
http://www.acerb.be/dw4/wip1.jpg

WIP2
http://www.acerb.be/dw4/wip2.jpg

WIP3
http://www.acerb.be/dw4/wip3.jpg

WIP4
http://www.acerb.be/dw4/wip4.jpg

Nox
02-24-2009, 02:01 AM
Really like where everyone is going and the different feeling of culture that we got here keep it up everyone...

Here is my ongoing entry. :buttrock:

I keep the pencil on seperate until I have a really good ground painting going on.


http://www.thetecheng.com/dominance/General-Killer.jpg
http://www.thetecheng.com/dominance/General-Killer2.jpg

StarSewn
02-24-2009, 02:30 AM
These concepts are looking awesome. I think AcerB has nailed it with the team colors. Also, Nickolay, nice incorporation of the team logo. Nice job everyone.

DoctorMonkeyFist
02-24-2009, 02:33 AM
Great work form everyone! http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/2552/90665082.jpgHere's my sketch. I might focus on the 3d instead. I haven't decided.

stridiggio
02-24-2009, 03:04 AM
Very cool the new Generals and great progress also for all.
WIP5.
http://i652.photobucket.com/albums/uu249/stridiggiostuffs/StridiggioDW4wip5.jpg
:beer:

madbot
02-24-2009, 03:17 AM
Thanks for the comment Rupy I appreciate it. I feel I'm on a better track now.
Love your progress by the way, the colours are terrific.

Tedskis
02-24-2009, 03:19 AM
a few people have tried to help me do this but im still lost. I have uploaded my art to deviant art, but after i click the insert "image button" what link should i put to view my image?

http://tedskis.deviantart.com/art/DOMINANCE-WAR-WIP-113947097 is the address to my picture on deviantart but when i put this in the field nothing shows up when i post.
http://tedskis.deviantart.com/art/DOMINANCE-WAR-WIP-113947097

GaeasHerald
02-24-2009, 04:18 AM
Tedskis:

if it helps, here's how to work around it using a Photobucket account:

A: create a Photobucket account (http://photobucket.com/), it's free!
B: upload your image to your Photobucket gallery.
C: if you place the cursor over an image in the gallery of yours, 4 addresses will appear (Email&IM; Direct Link; HTML Code, and IMG code). Copy the "Direck link" address.

D: when you are posting here on CGS, click on the yellowish box that looks like a postcard, right under the "copy/paste" symbols. Once you click on that box, a window should appear. Paste the "Direct link" address there.

E: voilá. It's done!

I guess other services work just as well, but this is the one I'm familiar with.
Hope it helps and best of luck!:wavey:

splintercannon
02-24-2009, 04:25 AM
I'm rather fond of how the teeth came out.

http://i263.photobucket.com/albums/ii152/splintercannon/general_protrait3.jpg

Oh, and STELLAR work coming out of everyone else! (God, I hope mine turns out half as good as some of these others!)

The Death Ritual begins

ShogunWarrior
02-24-2009, 04:27 AM
Hi everyone, a lot of good looking generals around here. My shout out goes to everyone who has participated in this event.. I am lucky to be a part of this fine team.. Here are some of my updates on my Commander or General..

http://inhouseal.com/dw/General7.jpg

http://inhouseal.com/dw/General8.jpg

http://inhouseal.com/dw/General9.jpg

http://inhouseal.com/dw/General10.jpg


Here i'm showing example of how to use the pen tool. I wanted the pendant to look as real as possible. In order to do this I used the pen tool to creat borders within the lines. I then colored the inside lines with orange, brown, yellow and white. Here is an example...

http://inhouseal.com/dw/General11.jpg

Then for the inside, i used photoshop, Filter-artistic-sponge. To get this nice gold nugget in the middle.

http://inhouseal.com/dw/General12.jpg


Then here i used the pen tool again to create this alien symbol and then darken the sides with brown and highlighted the outer edges with yellow and white. This came out pretty good and it looks real. I really like this pendant...For the rest of the armor I will use the pen tool. If you guys wanna make things look real and remove any perfections use the pen tool.. You can create wonders...glta...

http://inhouseal.com/dw/General13.jpg

This is the almost final result of the pendant.. Looks nice uh? hehehe...

dazdays
02-24-2009, 04:36 AM
http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w170/dayz1219/dominancewar_treesketchcopy.jpg

my first post on cg society and my first dominance war entry...

still very rough, but I think I have the concept down...
I was originally inspired by the creatures from "shadow of the colossus"..I thought about having the general as this massive creature to which a whole city is built upon...nations war against eachother quite literally having these creatures aiding them as battlestations/frontline in battles.

JonathanLin
02-24-2009, 04:47 AM
AcerB, your wip looks awesome! o_o

Anyway,
Quick question: How do you make a final submission?

I'm not done yet, but I was clicking around in the OP post and the first link goes to game artisan, and then 2nd link, I don't see a submit button?

Also, Sorry if this is a noob question... but we're on the cgsociety team right? or... I'm confused.

jamihn
02-24-2009, 05:12 AM
Starting to block in some color.

http://www.jamihn.com/wip/dwGeneral04.jpg

dwinbotp
02-24-2009, 05:45 AM
ShogunWarrior, How are you man? Long time no see, Glad to see your new stuff and your general is looking great man! Can't wait to see it finished, Good luck bro:)

ShogunWarrior
02-24-2009, 06:04 AM
Hey Edwin!! hows my best friend?? I know you didn't miss out on this competition, send me a link bro, so i can see your rough work?? Its really good to hear from you and I hope things are going well for you.. Thanks for the compliment on my character.. I worked so hard and I hope it gets better before i get tired and gets worser, i dunno.. struggling here.. Hit me up and email me your example work or link.. my new email is peter@inhouseal.com (http://forums.cgsociety.org/peter@inhouseal.com). Alright talk to you later edwin, take care for now.

Jamihn, your work is awesome man, I like the way you quick sketched your work and its coming out smooth, I really like it a lot, hit me up take care everyone.

Penguinus
02-24-2009, 06:26 AM
Pfft. I probably wont win but oh well worth a try. I'm going xenos! Hes looking senile for the time being i guess.
http://i416.photobucket.com/albums/pp248/penguinus/c02.jpg

ROBOTTANK
02-24-2009, 06:34 AM
Like many here, I'm new to CG. I'm actually new to digital art as well (less than a year), I just found out about DW a couple of months ago & it sounds exciting. I'm really interested in participating, it's fun & good practice! anyway, my preliminary sketch..


http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/hafdedplatoonleader/war-general.jpg

EjcBlue3
02-24-2009, 06:42 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/newgallerycrits/g00/124200/124200_1235460824_large.jpg
Here is my general almost ready to go to paint. Just a few more things to tighten up.

Tedskis
02-24-2009, 06:45 AM
here is my wip

Tedskis
02-24-2009, 06:51 AM
gaeasHerald _ much thanks!!!

http://i562.photobucket.com/albums/ss66/tedskis/GENERAL-copy.jpg

splintercannon
02-24-2009, 07:16 AM
FACE PAINT! Who called it???

http://i263.photobucket.com/albums/ii152/splintercannon/general_protrait4.jpg

Esoteric knowledge about the last of things.
My sweet eschatological vision.
Foundation for the renewal of the world,
immemorial sins, never redeemed.

Toastage
02-24-2009, 07:21 AM
I already posted this on polycount but I didn't quite understand how the whole team thing worked. So I'm gonna join you guys :D

Here's my first sketch, I know it's got no emblem and the colours are wrong but that's easily fixed :D

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a336/Toastage/robotGeneral.jpg

BluntPencil
02-24-2009, 07:29 AM
Wow, splendid updates since yesterday, folks. I'd say we have a very strong gang building here. :D
And thanks for the kind words, those who commented on moi. ^^

Sepulverture
02-24-2009, 08:00 AM
Thumbnail sketches for my general.

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a330/sepulverture/GeneralGrigendauntcopy.jpg

NavigatorJones
02-24-2009, 08:16 AM
LOL
Ok thank god for Adobe's download option when buying O_O *faints*
I worked mah lil ass off on this today, trying to catch up to you guys D8!
I think I'm gonna go catch some Zzzzs now XD

PICTURE! (bah, half the detail got lost in the jpeg-ing ... :hmm: )

http://i40.tinypic.com/2cypqpg.jpg

Jakkels
02-24-2009, 08:24 AM
Hi all, I'm very excited about this comp. can't wait to get home every day to work some more on my general. here is a W.I.P. good luck to all.

NavigatorJones
02-24-2009, 08:31 AM
Also, creepy as shiz, Tedskis, creepy as shizzz XD I like how her head is breaking apart and floating off :D

LOL come to the dark side, Toastage.... :buttrock: I read on the DW feature that they were thinking it would be interesting to see how 'forum loyalty' shifted this time around, given that so many more forums were joining the fray. So glad i joined this time around, this has been the best fun, and great for learning new skills. Just seeing what you guys come up with blows my mind. Go team CG :bowdown:

REKLAS
02-24-2009, 09:03 AM
Decided to make him a bit more sinister.

Update 03:
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/9362/wargeneralwip004.jpg

Still need stronger highlights on the metal so it reads as metal. Feedback is more than welcome.

Innate
02-24-2009, 09:04 AM
So here's my illustration, time to paint!




http://www.natehallinan.com/concept%20images/General_Parvula_Small.jpg

CharlesVarenne
02-24-2009, 09:32 AM
Hi,

1st coloring pass.
Did an overlay of color and a lot of paint over.
Change the design so he looks more like a general and less than a king or emperor.
C and C welcome.

BadgerPirate; that's fun. Would be cool if you dig the concept
Toastage, cylstudio81: really nice lighting and mood.
Jaminh , Okmer thats turning real nice.
Ejc: ahah nice expression
Derrick Song: Nice color and design looking forward to see more.
Nikolay. I really like the smooth rendering you did.
AcerB: Nice and creepy
Stuff are getting more and more exciting here!
http://www.charlesvarenne.com/Images/Drawings/General01_09.jpg

DeadInTheAttic
02-24-2009, 09:34 AM
Hi!
Wow, this develops to become some kind of a main contest.
Here again a step of commander Vorian Atreides.
I got an idea for another general, based on this one, which I will post the next time.
And by the way, he's screaming commands (perhaps I should at a certain background like a spacebattle oder a tactical monitoring system).

http://features.cgsociety.org/newgallerycrits/g10/365210/365210_1235471066_large.jpg

Remton
02-24-2009, 09:46 AM
Wow ! Things going fine on here !

Small update for my general :

http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/8345/dw4wip02.jpg

Yone
02-24-2009, 10:01 AM
Well here’s some feedback on the great work I’m seeing all over the forum. You guys put my work to shame :cry:

Reklas: Seeing your original design, the creature was the most interesting part as it was really original in the way it looked. Now but covering it up it’s really loosing its identity. It needs to be more ornate as there is a lack of military elements, like medals, sashes, stars. The armour to me seems a bit too functional and ready for battle.

Rawwad: Love your design for your general. The lighting defiantly makes it look great. When can we see more posts?

Gatlingg: Hey! It is great to see one of the few female generals on the forum. I absolutely love the colour and the look and everything is working great. Maybe she is a bit too on the center of the page, in my opinion, maybe lowering her on the page could make for a better composition.

Nikolay: This is definitely my favourite piece. You have a great charcter a bit of a mixture between a general and a bishop. But the military side stands out. Awsome work.

:bowdown: To all other guys in DW.

WildBrew
02-24-2009, 10:04 AM
More details.

http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/283/generalportrait02.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

OKMER
02-24-2009, 10:30 AM
yessai, amazing stuff popping up from all over the place!So cool!!
AcerB, Ferx buddies, happy to see you around!:-):beer:
Tryng to aim for a more dynamic lightning and started blocking out some formes on the suit.
I'll try to work the underwater feeling more out later on.
http://www.remkotroost.com/forums/turtgeneral6.jpg
Still hesitating with this more punky background color:
http://www.remkotroost.com/forums/turtgeneral5.jpg
Whatta ya think?, C & C very welcom

DoomedSeraph
02-24-2009, 10:52 AM
Whatta ya think?, C & C very welcom

I think it's a brilliant piece of design. The only things I'm struggling with are the stars on the 'skull' and the fin detail on top. Neither seem to fit right with the contours of their bases. Love it though, good work Okmer.

Art2
02-24-2009, 10:53 AM
Cool character Remko.

I like the blue better than the yellow.
Maybe you could try to add more greenish in the background, if you want to play with the colour.

I did some spying :D on the CGHub forum, some cool stuff there. Check it out (http://cghub.com/forum/showthread.php?t=638&page=3)

NavigatorJones
02-24-2009, 10:59 AM
OKMER - Hmm tough call, I think the bluer background fits in with the mood of your pallet, but on the other hand you don't want him 'disappearing' too much.

Remton - She's looking very nice, love the hat, but her eye looks a bit too big? Unless that's what you were going for XD It gives her more of a cartoony feel, is all, not a bad thing though :D

Remton
02-24-2009, 11:21 AM
NavigatorJones - Thanks for the feedback, I will fix the eye to a more realistic render ( I'll try BTW ...)

Okmer - I prefer the blue background too. Nice design

Jsac
02-24-2009, 11:28 AM
Hello again ! I see a lot of cool stuff posted so far, can't wait to see the finals.
Donno what happened to my image. I try again:

<a href="http://s723.photobucket.com/albums/ww233/jsac_ro/?action=view&current=prezentare.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://i723.photobucket.com/albums/ww233/jsac_ro/prezentare.jpg" border="0" alt="prezentare"></a>

http://i723.photobucket.com/albums/ww233/jsac_ro/prezentare.jpg

http://i723.photobucket.com/albums/ww233/jsac_ro/prezentare.jpg

I hope it works ! :wavey:

OKMER
02-24-2009, 11:32 AM
DoomedSeraph:Thx man, yep, still not convinced by the fins & stars neither...

Art2: Hey Marlon man,nice to see you in! thx.yeah, you're right,definitly going to try to add some more greenish touches.

NavigatorJones: thx man.yeh,great point.I'll maybe try to desaturate or lighten it up a bit more later on.

ROBOTTANK
02-24-2009, 12:13 PM
Okmer, I actually dig the stars! It looks bad ass, original, and makes it more convincing (as far as a war general). Not sure about the fin though, I'd modify it to short spikes and take the fin out (just an idea). The blue background is cool.

g3p
02-24-2009, 12:26 PM
thx for comments, guys.
new progress. I'm add background like a curtains

comments and critics ever welcome.

c'ya!

http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_kk4CPOihirc/SaP0X-H_-OI/AAAAAAAAAM0/JCfzvaPS6qM/s1600-h/wip02.jpg

or try

http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_kk4CPOihirc/SaP0X-H_-OI/AAAAAAAAAM0/JCfzvaPS6qM/s1600-h/wip02.jpg

JamrozGary
02-24-2009, 12:27 PM
Okmer thanks for the kind words...
the one you just did is really great!! I love it !!!

AcerB, nice de te voir ici man.

my little update...fixed som mistake in the face...more child now.
but i hesitate between two version...you will see and don't hesitate to gimme your opinion.

thanks

http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t105/laanrohs/generals3.jpg

the other one
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t105/laanrohs/generals3bis.jpg