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joserobertoe
02-16-2009, 05:18 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/nvart/245633_1234808333/680bound
(http://assets.cgsociety.org/nvart/245633_1234808333/1024bound)Well I thought in a very relax situation. My inspiration was my father and my dog. I took some pictures and I started to draw and put things.

Aldeba
02-17-2009, 08:49 AM
Well done, interesting idea but it's looked not finished. The sky tooks 2/3 of the picture but is too simple. Also horizont line is too sharp, and the sea is not so detailed at foreground as they should be I think. But it's very positive and funny like concept. Good luck! =)

joserobertoe
02-17-2009, 03:05 PM
Thanks for your comment
I hope to improve my work -and my english- soon.

tiello
02-21-2009, 08:16 PM
Regardless, you are presenting a nice lifestyle.

dodgeOrBURN
02-24-2009, 03:50 PM
I really like what you have achieved here - especially the use of negative space. I agree that the ocean seems unfinished and the horizon is a little harsh. With a little touch up I believe you will have a very nice painting. Good luck!

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