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Nelson Jr
07-01-2003, 08:39 PM
So what you guys think about this pencil-made joanna dark ( Perfect Dark - N64)



http://geocities.yahoo.com.br/jrgtulab/index/Desenho/Jo.htm

Hellwolve
07-02-2003, 12:26 AM
IMHO, she's way too skinny; she lacks breast definition.

Even is she's not well endowed, IMHO, these are more like lil' girl/small teen boobs :p

Furthermore, she seems a bit strethced out. Mostly the torso/waist.

The head looks a bit skewed.

No more C&C, but then again, I'm no expert ;)

Hookflash
07-02-2003, 12:45 AM
That's a pretty decent red X. Oh, wait... Your pic isn't showing up;).

Nelson Jr
07-02-2003, 12:39 PM
Originally posted by Hookflash
That's a pretty decent red X. Oh, wait... Your pic isn't showing up;).

Yeah, sometimetimes it appears, and smtms not. Anyway, try a quote in any post then hit backspace to return. There she is!!

Nelson Jr
07-02-2003, 12:44 PM
Originally posted by Hellwolve
IMHO, she's way too skinny; she lacks breast definition.

Even is she's not well endowed, IMHO, these are more like lil' girl/small teen boobs :p

Furthermore, she seems a bit strethced out. Mostly the torso/waist.

The head looks a bit skewed.

No more C&C, but then again, I'm no expert ;)

Yep, you're right, the body isn't like the original character. It wasn't my intention too :thumbsup:. But, what you think about 6B pencil-made shadows? I spent one and half hours to do it!

Hellwolve
07-02-2003, 01:15 PM
Originally posted by Nelson Jr
Yep, you're right, the body isn't like the original character. It wasn't my intention too :thumbsup:

Perhaps, yes, but my point still stands IMHO; her anatomy is not right.

But, what you think about 6B pencil-made shadows? I spent one and half hours to do it! [/B]

No crits from me on the shadows :thumbsup:

Nelson Jr
07-02-2003, 01:49 PM
Originally posted by Hellwolve
Perhaps, yes, but my point still stands IMHO; her anatomy is not right.



No crits from me on the shadows :thumbsup:
I' ll make a " right " Joanna specially for you Hellwolve!! Thanks for the critics!!:thumbsup:

Hellwolve
07-02-2003, 03:20 PM
Originally posted by Nelson Jr
I' ll make a " right " Joanna specially for you Hellwolve!! Thanks for the critics!!:thumbsup:

Heh, cool, thanks :beer:

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