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morin
07-01-2003, 11:41 AM
Hi,guys. It`s my new pic, This men is our china Great litterateur.

Maybe you don`t know him. :p

HH.. I used 3dsmax5.0 and shan.fur . http://3dtop.nease.net/2003/luxun.jpg

Goron
07-01-2003, 12:59 PM
you made a good job morin,
but i think you need to improve your lighting, because the darkness area or too black, especially in the mouth area.

Sorry for my bad english...:hmm:

Joel_Longie
07-01-2003, 06:12 PM
Thatís really cool. I agree about the lighting, maybe a back light to make him pop out a bit more. One thing that is a little strange, it looks like the alignment of his nose, lips and chin sort of smear off to the right. I like it though, good texturing work.

UnlikelyCorny
07-01-2003, 09:02 PM
great stuff, don't know what a litterateur is, but that does not matter.
If you would ask me to be nitpickin' I would say that the neck seems oddly thin, possibly caused by the dark shadows and that the greases arround the eyes look somewhat 'designed' instead of natural. The skin of the cheeks and forehead is nicely textured with a nice organic feel, which I miss a bit under the eyes where you have those Z shaped wrinckles.

All that being said the eyes are beautiful and the face is an obvious portrait, not a designed 'head'.

Any particular reason for this portrait?

morin
07-02-2003, 06:56 AM
Thank s everyone,

I collect everybody`s advice to be update the picture.

morin
07-02-2003, 07:24 AM
http://3dtop.nease.net/2003/luxun-F.jpg


I buy the plastermodel , according to that Create model,

polygon s

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