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rbfeik
02-12-2009, 05:40 PM
Any ideas, suggestions, etc. welcome

http://www.vickievolpe.com/vickie.jpg

chop (http://www.vickievolpe.com/chop_.swf)

flip (http://www.vickievolpe.com/flip.swf)

walk (http://www.vickievolpe.com/vickie_walk.swf)

torch (http://www.vickievolpe.com/torch.swf)

torresmedia
02-12-2009, 05:51 PM
Chop: Work with the camera, and make the wink quicker.
Flip: The sword lookes wierd, and the landing looks a bit to "light". Try to give the charecter more weight...
Torch: Looks great. Maybe try giving her more weight.... (More up and down/side to side movement)
Walk: Same as above.

Other then that, see looks great! ^^ Keep it up!

rbfeik
02-13-2009, 06:46 PM
Chop: Work with the camera, can you be more specific and make the wink quicker.
Flip: The sword lookes wierd, again - can you be more specific and the landing looks a bit to "light". too slow, hold too long? I thought maybe the 2nd jump should be quicker.........still undecidedTry to give the charecter more weight...
Torch: Looks great. Maybe try giving her more weight.... (More up and down/side to side movement)
Walk: Same as above.

Other then that, see looks great! ^^ Keep it up!


the quick red fox



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