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djrovers123
02-10-2009, 06:40 PM
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Cati
02-12-2009, 09:40 AM
Hello there!

I really like the values, the moon and the mist. You've done good job to make it look like what it should look like. :)

But there's one thing that's a bit distracting - there's nothing for the eye to concentrate on. It needs a a lot more detail and something that's interesting to look at and study.

You probably should think more about the composition and the reason for anyone to look at a painting. What is the picture all about? It's a mountain landscape - but what makes it so interesting to look at? It could be a nice background for some characters but when there's no chacarter a simple landscape needs something more to attract the viewer. You need to have a purpose for a landscape.. a lovely mountain stream gleaming under the moon perhaps. Just something that keeps our interest there and tells us more about what has happened to the area just a second ago and what will happen there a few seconds later.

Hope it helps..;)

djrovers123
08-10-2009, 10:08 AM
:bounce: wowowow thanks a lottt :bowdown: i really appricaite your valuable critiques i will post the new update today its been a long time since i am here and now there area lot of stuff that i want ot showw greatt thanks a lot again :thumbsup:

arielmedel
08-10-2009, 01:18 PM
Where's the beauty and the beast?

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