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jgsketch22
02-10-2009, 05:52 PM
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Title: Swamp Creature
Name: * José Gómez
Country: USA
Software: Painter, Photoshop

This piece was created first as a gouache painting a while back. I decided to repaint it digitally using PainterX and Photoshop CS3. Oil brushes and Palette Knife in Painter, CS3 for color correcting.
yahyaehsan
02-11-2009, 11:11 AM
-The non-unified level of finish/style is not making it interesting!
-you need more contract to make suggest the flow of your illustration.
-there is too much black in swamp creature.
AlbertoChuqui
02-11-2009, 02:07 PM
Hi josé!

I like the colors of your art work, but there are so much noise between objects in blur and some well detailed foliage parts. The soldiers zone lacks on details making the monster and soldiers go in different ways like 2 detached compositions.

Take your time adding those improvements once the work is done, believe me, it is one of the most important step.

Keep it up, cheers!
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