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gmagno
02-09-2009, 11:31 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/nvart/357538_1234222295/680bound
(http://assets.cgsociety.org/nvart/357538_1234222295/1024bound)http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_o693z6VFr8c/SZeNMCjWJTI/AAAAAAAAAOc/OZ1UA6b3Oak/s1600-h/progress.jpgHi! My name is Gilberto Magno. I'm 2d and 3d artist in Brazil.
About my post ... the idea came in a morning after observing works tirelessly to Jacek Yerka and Jim Warren. As the deadline was 10 days, ran with the composition to deliver.
I would like suggestions for improving my work.

Thank you!

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Composition in: Maya, Zbrush and Photoshop.

tiello
02-10-2009, 04:51 AM
Great job! I think your piece is already there. You asked for suggestions. A couple things maybe worth considering, is adding a bit mre depth in the water, and possibly a bit more contrast to help separate each of the elements. I hope it's helpful, like I said, great job.

GerR
02-10-2009, 05:28 AM
There seems to be a lot of grain that came from your canvas overlay, seems to detract a bit from the image i think. Great job though.

gmagno
02-11-2009, 04:59 PM
Thanks for the suggestions. I'm working to improve this work. I'm also adjusting the colors.
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_o693z6VFr8c/SZeNMCjWJTI/AAAAAAAAAOc/OZ1UA6b3Oak/s1600-h/progress.jpg
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_o693z6VFr8c/SZeNMCjWJTI/AAAAAAAAAOc/OZ1UA6b3Oak/s1600-h/progress.jpg

gmagno
02-11-2009, 05:03 PM
Sorry... double post!

gmagno
02-11-2009, 05:05 PM
Sorry... double post!

gmagno
02-11-2009, 08:10 PM
Sorry... double post!

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