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Gezstar
06-30-2003, 07:09 PM
Hi there. For the past few months I've been working on a comic I'm drawing and co-writing, called Digital Graffiti. It's being put out by AP Comics (http://www.apcomics.com/) from November, and I'm pretty excited about it. :)

Here's the cover - c&c would be appreciated, especially cos I can still change it before it gets published. I'll probably update this thread with some character designs later on. :buttrock:

http://www.gezfry.com/pics/gez_digigraf_issue1cover.jpg

Our blurb:

"Digital Graffiti - a new take on London, a few centuries from now. Towering buildings stretch high into the sky, reaching through the clouds for a better way of life. Back at street level, life remains much as today: cars, schools, and an overabundance of resentment at the elite above. When education ends and unemployment looms, teenagers band together to place their identity in a gang style, each gang adopting a separate motif and lifestyle. They lash out at society by scrambling the digital advertisements that cover the surfaces up and down the city.

Meet Beez - our cheeky and resourceful hero, who thinks himself too good for gang life. He yearns to break his way into the upper levels of society - but he canft do it on his own. He finds help from best friend Lincoln, boss of The Pride. Violent, unstable, but undoubtedly charismatic, he commands fierce loyalty and knows how to use it.

Meet Lon - sinister boss of the Kei-Wan, local rivals brimful of technologically obsessed minions. Determined to hit the Pride where it hurts, Lon makes every effort to scupper Beezfs plans. Throw into the mix Pride heavyweights Kenzo and Sirius, bigoted cops from the Street, robot cops from the Sky, and a gang rumble seems inevitable.

Meet Sapphire - Lonfs sister, and a rare beauty. A tragic past has left her with a hatred of gangs, and inspires her own desire to leave the hope-free street level. When Beez and Sapphire first lock eyes, mutual attraction is inevitable - as is the impossibility of their union.

A Manga take on West Side Story, full of the passion of reckless youth!"

Nogustah
06-30-2003, 09:39 PM
Very nice comic art, I dig it.

Do you bomb? Or use to?

schmu_20mol
06-30-2003, 09:49 PM
i personally really like that cover....just one thing i'd change is that girl in the bg with the white top...i'd make her bigger/looking nearer or does she have to be a bit separated from the group?...

btw...i like the story so far and if the comic's style is like that on the cover i think i'd like it pretty much at all....so does this one get published in germany too?

Barbas
06-30-2003, 10:51 PM
The whole concept looks very nice one thing i would change is the brunnete girls eyes. I know this is manga but her eyes seem a bit too angled down, escpecially the left one try to make them a bit more straight

art7sayan
06-30-2003, 10:58 PM
Awesome colors my man! :applause:

One crit though, the group/crowd on the back of that bad guy isn't really clear...I don't know if it's an important group but for now we can't really see it... just my two cents :p

Good luck :buttrock:

-Arty-

darkcult
07-01-2003, 07:27 AM
Just brilliant.

:beer:

lindavanbruggen
07-01-2003, 11:07 AM
*shocked*
:eek: :eek:

looking fabulous.

gilbert_chong
07-01-2003, 02:38 PM
war nice man...............:drool:
like master works.............:eek:

Gezstar
07-01-2003, 06:34 PM
Nogustah - thanks! I have a few times, but I suck. Digital graffiti is a lot easier than real-life graf!!

schmu - cheers! Yeah, the white-top girl is Sapphire, so that's why she has to be a bit distant. Don't worry, she'll get closer in future issues ;) If it's hard to get hold of in Germany, try the AP website (in my original post) for a mail-order. Thanks again :buttrock:

Barbas - thanks! Yeah, her eyes are like that to represent her character - she's a little ditzy, so that's why I used a slightly different look for her.

art7sayan - thanks! Yeah, I agree about the Kei-Wan group - I may scale them up a bit. Should come out better in print anyway.

darkcult - cheers! :beer:

lindavanbruggen - thanks!

gilbert - thanks man!

flipper kun
07-01-2003, 07:45 PM
love it

Black Jesus
07-01-2003, 09:21 PM
really nice work, man... i wish i could draw like that.

Chris Antonelle
07-01-2003, 10:32 PM
great job - drawings - story - everything
looking forward to it!

Gezstar
07-02-2003, 03:30 PM
flipper kun - cheers!

Black Jesus - thanks man!

Chris Antonelle - thanks a lot!

cuse
07-02-2003, 04:12 PM
hey Gezstar, great work... will be cool to see it on the stands ;)

make sure you post any more/character designs etc...

EDIT:- Just checked the link, the digitalGraffiti charcters look awesome on there, as do the rest of the 'scene's'


cuse

pushav
07-02-2003, 09:08 PM
I see that you want this book to be known. Hopefully it will hit big.
Good luck on it.

Mangled Poly
07-03-2003, 05:54 PM
awesome stuff i love that style man simply amazing

Gezstar
07-04-2003, 05:12 PM
cuse - hey thanks, and I do hope you see it on the stands! I'm just not sure it'll be that widely available.

pushav - you're not wrong mate, this comic is my pride and joy right now. Thanks for the kind words man.

Mangled Poly - glad you like the style man!

:thumbsup:

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