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Rijn
02-08-2009, 09:50 AM
Hy all,

This is my first full portrait. I have made some practice on separate parts of homan face, but this one is a full cover to cover portrait, that I'm very proud of, because I have never done something like this before. Im learning how to draw from a book, so I would really appreciate your advices and help.

will be continued....

thanks a lot,
R

ps.: also my first post here ^^

Rijn
02-08-2009, 10:59 AM
aaand the pic....that i forgot in the first post :)

http://www.gaborhertelendy.com/lil.jpg

Menglin
02-08-2009, 12:07 PM
It look good but I think you still need more practice on the structure,muscle of the face.

mosoul
02-08-2009, 12:28 PM
I like the design of ur sketch despite that the anatomy of the body is off ;)

Rijn
02-08-2009, 01:18 PM
THANX FOR THE COMMENTS!

and here it comes the updateed version.

changes:
-new nose
-body perspective
-boobs
-hair
-shadows, highlights

http://www.gaborhertelendy.com/lil2.jpg

Rijn
02-15-2009, 12:37 PM
update #2............................................

http://www.gaborhertelendy.com/lil3.jpg

Hecatomb
02-15-2009, 02:59 PM
Don't overdo the sketching. If you want to do some shading, pick a soft brush. Right now you're making her look like she has a beard.

kennychaffin
02-15-2009, 05:35 PM
Looking great to me. I'm not seeing the shadow as a beard. Maybe you have you contrast upped on your monitor...

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