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Menglin
02-06-2009, 02:24 PM
This's the recent practice I did,which is a human-like monster.I am not quite sure about the using of color and how to make it more a work than practice. :buttrock: hope for your critique.
http://space.chinavisual.com/attachments/2009/02/198122_200902062317511ohiK.jpg

Junerahe
02-06-2009, 06:08 PM
I really really like what I'm seeing so far. Could you be more specific as to which area you need help with?

Great work so far!

Kirt
02-06-2009, 07:10 PM
Not sure what you want either. I think it looks really good although somewhat incomplete. I'd continue that with some more leaves (green leaf in the background near his eyes) on the right side of the image; add more detail and form to his hair and beard; and add more lines (as seen on his jaw) along his neck and shoulder area.

Menglin
02-07-2009, 06:35 AM
Thanks Kirt for comment.
I am a little confused with how to improve my skill and You really got what I mean.
I will keep modifying.Thank again and hope for your next comment.

Menglin
02-07-2009, 07:39 AM
I really really like what I'm seeing so far. Could you be more specific as to which area you need help with?

Great work so far!
I am so glad you said that.
I am kind of a beginner.I alway make my work incomplete as kirt had said.It could be a big problem I think.

LstDROPzz
02-07-2009, 08:51 AM
wow) i really like it too, but think you can add more details on his neck for better view of muscle structure...
I also like colours.
very good work! :)

Menglin
02-07-2009, 10:50 AM
wow) i really like it too, but think you can add more details on his neck for better view of muscle structure...
I also like colours.
very good work!
I think I have to refer to some anotomy book for better muscle.It's really hard for me since I took too little time to learn the basic.:) Thank for comment.

Menglin
02-07-2009, 01:17 PM
I modified it into a speedpaint and decided not to do it further.it is as such

http://space.chinavisual.com/attachments/2009/02/198122_200902072213561zdDx.jpg

acb12
02-07-2009, 03:18 PM
great work @_@ tho i would like to like to see this one finished :D

Menglin
02-08-2009, 04:21 AM
great work @_@ tho i would like to like to see this one finished :D
I will try it sometime.

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