Action reel

[vfxnerd]

Hey nice work. Your green screen keys are solid. I thought your first shot was the strongest so that was a good idea to keep it first. Some other shot like the one with the skull and people dancing wasn't as strong so I'd say take those out. The last shot with the car blowing up needs some work, the blacks are probably to dark but other than that it's not bad.

[djart73]

Hi mojokdirector,

congrats to your reel.
But, if you dont mind, :-) i must agree with vfxnerd.
Later animations like the skull thing dont really fit into your reel.

My first impression from the first shot was, WHOOO...COOL!
But the there ist to much different work in your reel.

I think take a few shots out and put in more of the greenscreen stuff in :-), thats fun and interessting to watch.

Best regards, rasher73

[mojokdirector]

Thanks Guys, I took out the skull/club thing and organized things a little more so it isn't as random. The green screen film is a work in progress I am doing on my free time so that's all I have so far. I put in some other stuff that might make it more interesting as well. tell me if you like this one better:
http://www.mojokstudios.com/personal22.mov

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