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ranggaumbas
02-02-2009, 03:54 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/nvart/357685_1233550454/680bound
(http://assets.cgsociety.org/nvart/357685_1233550454/1024bound)hello.. i try to imagine if i was yerka. and this is what comes out.. i hope its surrealist enough..
done with 3Dmax+vray and photoshop

Adhinug
02-02-2009, 04:04 AM
interesting concept, mate! :thumbsup:
but perhaps the ambience is a bit too dark?

fietter
02-02-2009, 04:07 AM
great job mate...nicely well done
i love your tone color, good luck bro...!!!

ElChristopho
02-02-2009, 02:20 PM
This is one of my favorites. Great job. Love the moon.

JBrant
02-02-2009, 07:07 PM
I like this image as well. It's simple and fun. I think it could use a few adjustments, though.

-the leaves look like they were copied right out of the "inspiration" section. I think your idea is original and well executed and that the copied leaves take away from the image.
-the grass is a bit too regular
-image could be brighter overall

Again, I think it's a nice piece.
Good luck.

ranggaumbas
02-06-2009, 07:58 AM
helo..
@ adhinug thanks mate.. i think i will try a lighter one for the second entry (if ihave time) hehe
@ fietter : thanks bro
@ elchristopho : thanks man..
@ jbrant : thanks man.. it work with the leaves for a long time.. but it is still so hard to make it more random. and i also tried many texture on them.. but somehow the one from the inspiration section looks better, again thanks man

i really apreciate the comments guys..
it really helps for my second entry.. i hope i can still make it

dodgeOrBURN
02-06-2009, 03:29 PM
Fabulous idea with meticulous detail! I agree that the light needs to be bumped up a bit: you have such an interesting dynamic with the day/night concept that I would encourage you to make more contrast with the mountains & sky and the doorway. Congratulations and good luck!


Lynda

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