Angel of Rock, Rainer Petter (2D)

[linainverse23]

I think more work on the figure is needed. She doesn't look as though she has all of her value and tones rendered out (from muslce and body formations). Her proportions need some work as well (everyone has had trouble with body proportions before so don't feel bad). The guitar is very nice though, and is very well rendered. It is very beautiful. although the strap doesn't seem right (it's a little too loose). Tighten it up across her body, you don't have to have it follow the curves of her chest. Keep working at it though. It seems like you're on the right track. Keep rendering her and add more variations in skin tones and shadows and such. Add some tints of green and teal to show reflective highlights from the guitar. Keep it up.

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