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C-mon
06-27-2003, 06:40 PM
Ive been working on this model for couple days. http://freeweb.siol.net/simkme/copm_at_night_01.jpg

C-mon
06-27-2003, 10:18 PM
I tweaked teh area aruond mouth and eyes a litle, and i would like to get some comments:sad:

http://freeweb.siol.net/simkme/wireframe.jpg

Shade01
06-27-2003, 10:24 PM
Interesting, not what I was imagining. It's got good personality, and it's creepy. I like it.

Hey C-mon, have you met Cman? :p

Chagidiel
06-27-2003, 10:40 PM
This is a cool idea and a good model. The face has a great expression! Somehow... the character appers more expressive in the wireshot than the render. Donīt know but it might be the glasses that doesent really suite the guy.

I think you should have a look at and tweak the proportions of it all. The monitor has a kinda bouncy style, but the computer and keybord are rather straight. I think you should bonce them up a little.
Then I think you should smaller the arms, make them thinner... but keep the hands in their apparent size.

Good job though! Looking forward for updates.

timsvw
06-28-2003, 02:34 AM
I love it. I think the mouth needs some work to fit with the detail that has been put into the hands and eyes.

Tim

NanoGator
06-28-2003, 04:41 AM
I can just picture Bender running away.

C-mon
06-28-2003, 06:56 AM
Wireshot model was tweaked a litle.
Thanks for suggestion Chagidiel.

Ill soon post an update.

C-mon
06-28-2003, 09:00 AM
Updated arms and face
Made some post p. in Photoshop
http://freeweb.siol.net/simkme/copm_at_night_02.jpg

C-mon
06-30-2003, 08:24 PM
What do you think about this update?
http://freeweb.siol.net/simkme/comp_at_night_04.jpg

NanoGator
06-30-2003, 08:30 PM
The mood's right, but his eyes aren't quite expressing his mood yet. They needs to be open farther and more intent.

Dis
06-30-2003, 08:33 PM
id twist the forearms a little and give its handpositions a "meaning", like what is he up to ?

good work !


Dis


edit: unless, thats just the setup pose ! :p

TheWriter
06-30-2003, 08:40 PM
I like it. :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

Chagidiel
06-30-2003, 09:59 PM
Ahh... cool uptates! Especially the new kind of lighting.

Though... I think you could go way further in thinning the arms, but I must stress the fact that this is a matter of personal taste in the end. It would suite my taste though ;)

Then I think you might have overenterpreted what I said about the bouncyness (?) :) BTW: The wire from the mouth is just super great :applause: but the disformity of the model is a bit too much I think. The bouncynesss I meant was more like.... hmmm... hard to explain and my english is lacking... but kind of Monkey Island (the LucasArts andventuregame-series) -bouncyness.

The disformity you have made makes the computer-guy look like his shivering... but that might be the whole idea?

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