Land Bridges

[nickmarshallvfx]

Nice work mate! If i had a crit, it would be that the arches seem a little too perfect, but other than that it looks very convincing!

Cheers

Nick

[eyecon]

space-sprayer: Thanks! Yeah... mmm it does look a bit perfect does it? I might take a look into that, and probablly change it when I have the time.

Thanks for the comment again mate

[djart73]

Hi eyecon,

i like your work, you got a nice mood there and its a place that would be cool to visit.
Nice colors and perspective, too.

Whats disturbing me a little is, the Waterfall on the right is a bit to bright and there should be a waterflow break, where the column is.

Greets rasher73

[eyecon]

rasher73: Thanks I shall consider your comment too. Although I did design the columns to be a bit farther than the edge of the falls. I'll see what I can do with that.

Thanks again!

[JJASSO]

good one ! I agree with the waterfalls being too bright , also if you say that the arches are a little further from the edge you should work more in atmosphere or add some water sparkling /steam like just to push it behind and integrate them better, what about some fooliage hanging from the arches just to make them look more natural and believable
take a look at this pic you will see how waterfalls brightness should look like in the shadow/overcast mood and you can add that water rising that looks like steam/smoke just to make the feel alive, and big scale

http://atejada.files.wordpress.com/2008/03/victoria-falls-jpg.jpg

[eyecon]

Hi James,

Thanks for the comment. Yes thats good advice I'll incorporate those and update this image.

Another thing... You were supposed to show me an image right? I somehow could not see it.

Oh.. the scale of the scene is kinda huge... So i think I might need to add smaller trees at the bottom just to illustrate the scale. Thanks again

[eyecon]

okay guys here is an update... hopefully this one will be better than before. Once again thanks for the criticism! I really appreciate it! :applause:

http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/3259/lostworldlandbridgeseyemk0.jpg (http://frenic.deviantart.com)

[djart73]

I liked it before but now i like it much much more ;-)

Great improvement!

Greets rasher73

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