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[Advarsky]

The sniper rifle is going to fall any second now. =) You have to change it's position..
And be careful with colours! It's very cold there now. You can add some warm colours to lightened surfaces.

[q12]

I told you they are cute.... :D
I supose this is the fun part ...aham...for you who are looking.
any sugestions about the color palete is welcome and I try my best to make this one the best ever...I hope so.
here is my begining to color.

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h208/q1212/cintiq-wacom/tst-compozitieculoarecopy1.jpg

[q12]

hy there , everybody.
I have survived so long here without a critique , i think it's a real record. :)
here is an update about my progress , I know is not much but... I do what I can.
I am still waiting for some words.
Thanks in advance.
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h208/q1212/cintiq-wacom/tst-compozitieculoarecopy2.jpg

[q12]

another step... I made the other guy there.
It looks more friendly now ,dont you think? haha.
and next I will look to background
Its kind a nice thing showing the curse of my evolution in this work.
Hope I get it right. Until now, nobody interested, hmm.
But I like it this way after all, no more bugging, I can continue then. :)
I hope in this night I can resume to that bck. Wish me luck.
end monolog. haha! Nice talking to myself.
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h208/q1212/cintiq-wacom/tst-compozitieculoarecopy3.jpg

[Everspace]

I would do some sort of a rusty brown for the backround personally. Some sort of "Previously Used" arena with debris scattered everywhere.

All those rusting robots could be a nice contrast with the new and shiny and innocent bots you have there. I guess it would also add more to your pallet.

An audience maybe?

[q12]

hello everybody! _________________(CyberGFX especially)_________________
this is my recent update for my wonderfull piece of work. heh.
no seriously, i looking for some insights because I dont "SEE anymore".
-I dont like the smashed second head (the lower one) and I think I will change it. Initialy I wanted to make it a bit funny but now I see its grotesque a little.
-A lot of free space above and under the models but I look for the general mood.(What can you tell me about mood versus storytelling?)
-There are no other objects to tell more story about the 2 guys there,I see that.
-The STORY, I see its not very clear even for me, because I make things in steps not alltogether and Its a wrong habit, but I think I will progress some day.
-I am not sure (I see its wright) but the anatomy is allright? head/arms/legs/chest? A second opinion dont hurt until its too late to change.
-What can I make more in it to look more like profesional artwork (like ?design art? for example)? Give me some links to watch how the Good Ones work and to confront with their talents and skils. I know i am a little guy who want MORE. I want to see how you think about this kind of work stile?
I know my place - Im not good at storytelling(yet) and backgrounds(I dont have exercised them very much -from memory I mean).
So enough with words lets see the facts:
et voila:

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h208/q1212/cintiq-wacom/tst-compozitieculoarecopy4.jpg

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