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linainverse23

01-25-2009, 12:35 AM

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Title: Marona
Name: Veronica Purpura
Country: USA
Software: Painter, Photoshop

I noticed that some of my descriptions are sort of long. I'll try to shorten it a bit. This is one of five female character studies I did of female characters of novels I write. The model is actually me (not kidding) and I had to modify myself alot (greater msucle tones, different chin line, and hair).

The foundation colors and background were done on Painter and then it was brought into Photoshop for the rest. Please critique it as you would like. If you like it, say so. See problems, explain why or what to do differently. Enjoy.

loenie

01-25-2009, 06:08 PM

I do believe this woman is very very strong. The shape is good and the muscles too, but I think it needs a bit more depth.

Example:
a: Harder lines in metal ( sharp reflections, or shining, from the light source somewere)
b: maybe add some more lighter skin tones (or high lights), for more 3-d on some places.

linainverse23

01-25-2009, 09:40 PM

thank you for the suggestions. Those tips are very helpful.

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