cinematic game icons - character - asela

[asela]

just another sketch before i send in models



here is the link to my works at cgchallenge
http://www.cgchallenge.com/entries/2071/34_large.jpg

[asela]

i cant seem to show much at 20 k
maybe ps dont make the files small enough
anybody with suggestions???

i have started with the face
here you go

[asela]

one more

[asela]

last one today

[DimitrisLiatsos]

HHeeeyyyyy!!! ...nice character...i like the look of his face:thumbsup: ...go :wip: ..more.

I will be back...

[lildragon]

You can use the [img] tags (I edited your post) to display your entry on the challenge site, and it'll be much more that 20kb ;)

Nice face btw :thumbsup:

-lild

[asela]

thanks people

lildragon, i am not familiar with all the commands
is there a thread that explains all the options?

thanks in advance
asela

[BladeFX]

Nice sketch.
The head is also comming along nicely.

I'll be following your updates :thumbsup:

[BinarySoup]

great stuff, LOVE the expression, in fact the mesh face is looking better than the concept face already, keep it coming!

[pigwater]

asela,...hey. like the character and the pose you got going:thumbsup:

as far as posting options: when at the posting page

1. attach a less than 20k image here using the little box down below "ATTACH FILE"....to get your file small enough - either a)shrink the dimension of your picture - b)save as jpeg and lower the compression to under 20k c) save as giff and lower/adjust colors # to under 20k

2. get your own web space...upload images to there and then in your message use the IMG button above the box you type in.....images on your own space can be any size i presume but use common sense...don't post huge suckers ...

3. on the challenge site..if you have a thread there for this challenge, they provide a place to place an image which is larger than allowed here...then use the same IMG button as mentioned above

[asela]

hey guys

thanks for the help and incouragment

i will be finding my own web space next week so it will help me add some bigger images

pigwater, thanks man ill try adding images soon

thanks

asela

just thought i'd add an update
not alot but started the body

here it goes

[asela]

one more

[asela]

last one today

[Kozlow]

Hi @Asela,
i like the face expression youv made, im just wondering why you start with a smile cuz iwhen i model i try to make a face neutral, prepared for thr future morph targes, well my way dosnt hawe to be the best :) The model is developing nice, i would resized the width of the thighs, but its to erly for such a comments, now ill wait for the baext update. Nice work:thumbsup:
Kamil

[mehdianim]

I'll agree with the method of modeling a smile first. With a stretched face you can place all the edges you need to make it look good and then deform it back to a neutral position. I always start with the smile as well! It gives the character all his charm!

Great job so far!!! :beer: :beer:
Go gO GO !!!

[asela]

hello and thanks for the incouragment

again this is what keeps everybody going inspite of work household stuff and women.

any way just a few update frames

here you go.

asela

as usual you can see alarge render at the cg challenge site

[Neox]

really good work so far, but look at his ass its way to high :surprised

[asela]

by the way

i posed the smile first not for the right reasons
i just dont have enough time for a full setup for this character
because i have started late.

i will put a skeleton to make the right pose but i am going to treat this model after its in the pose like akulpture.

anyways tell me what you think.

this is good time for crits..

thanks guys.

asela

[asela]

just one more

[asela]

thanks neox

ill take care of that but

[Scottosh]

Overall it's looking good,nice work.But I would suggest to size down the legs a little,they at least to me overpower the rest of the body.It's looking good,I think you should work overtime and get that rig done,it will pay divedends in the end.Nice job so far.:thumbsup:

[stenarts]

WOW!!! We have no chance...your work is looking great, that character already an icon for me.

Really amazing work

STEN ;-)

[LoTekK]

That's an awesome looking helmet you've got there. It simply oozes style. :thumbsup:

One major crit from me, though, is that his ass is TINY! :p I think that's what's making his legs look so huge (I kinda like the legs, btw).

[asela]

ok i am back

i envy all of the people with free time

LoTekk thanks for the tip
i have taken care of it
the legs are ment to be big because he is a "runner"

stenart : thanks man your work her is amazing

just thought i show an update
still working on the shoes suit and face (textures)

still have setup to do
how can i do it in time

asela

[asela]

another

[asela]

and another

[asela]

one more

[asela]

ok this is the time for crits...

keep em flowing i need them

scottosh: thanks
took care of it



asela

more details are in the challenge site
http://www.cgchallenge.com/gallery_artist.php?artist_id=2071

[Hellwolve]

I like everything, except for the backpack in the front...

I don't like it; it should be at the back IMHO.

Sorry :shrug:

[asela]

thanks hellwolve

i agree, its abit clumsy at the moment i ll try and fix it but because its sort of a fan i need it in the front but i ll try to improve the shape

asela

[Hellwolve]

Originally posted by asela
thanks hellwolve

i agree, its abit clumsy at the moment i ll try and fix it but because its sort of a fan i need it in the front but i ll try to improve the shape

asela

Alright, good luck, and show us something pretty ;)

[Ionized]

I think the front pouch should be inverted. Anything that sags at the bottom gives an impression of sluggishness. not something you want if your character is called runner! I suggest inverting it maybe and sticking it on the back like hellwolve said.

Other than that, it looks awesome. The helmet is great and the physique is chunky.

Keep going... only 3 days left!!

[asela]

thanks guys

i am working on those things

not enough time!!!!

asela

[asela]

this is your last chance for suggettions

take a look at the challenge site

please ...

asela

[Ionized]

This looks great asela! In that pose, the front puch looks prett good. I love the expression on the face and you have really captured a sense of speed.

Only comments would be try making the legs look like he is running maybe??? Right now, it sort of looks like a squat.

Another thing is the metal plates around the face. I can't tell what they are supposed to be doing or how they are attatched. I know it's a bit late to be making criticisms, but maybe you might want to get rid of them or do more work on them???

Good luck!! theres only hours left!!!:surprised

[asela]

thanks people i have had the best time this challenge

i have updated in the challenge site

check it out

ionized and every body who took the time to check the runner out
i thank u

i hope you like it

asela

[asela]

just thought id add the link so its easier for you


http://www.cgchallenge.com/gallery_artist.php?artist_id=2071

asela

[asela]

finished at last

bye

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