bag girl

[GateKeepeR]

I hate to say this, but its really even too early to be in WIP ;D
Looks like Gumby right now to me ;D

[vorlon]

Forget about making her head. I think you got something going on here, a girl with a bag on top of her head. Perhaps she is born with the bag on top of her. It could be a comedic animation, or a horror story. :wavey:

[BiTMAP]

the model is a horror story, Definatly needs work. However the last posts idea is good.

[BiTMAP]

I'm sorry, I can't lie and say that the model is wonderful, but i should at least say what can be done to help it.


First off I do understand that it is WIP, but I would expect a bit more done. But I guess You must just be excited.. I'm sorry to stomp on your bubble and pee on your parade. :(

If you define your model's features, I'm not saying make it realistic, but define features, make the paper bag have edges, give everypolygone character. Give everything reason. I truly think this could have potential.

[djinn]

nice bag!=)

[BloodOmen]

Marcinko: i'm sorry if i offended ... i honestly dont know y it would offended people...... but if it did i'm sorry


anyways....

BiTMAP: i asked for some c&c and u gave it to me
:applause:


so just give the bag rougher edges and maybe so muscle tone? :\

vorlon : thats a really cool idea i think i will as some i learn how to animate

[Remi]

Bloodomen...don't worry about offending people...tell them to go elsewhere if they feel offended....it's art and they have a choice of whether or not to look at it.

Now...the model needs lots of work...perhaps giving it some folds in the clothing or perhaps giving it some textures would help. It's very boxy and not very flowing.....spend some time putting some extra details into it instead of hurrying just so you can post something. I'd like to see you're ref if you're using one and if not make sure you have something...doesn't have to be the actual character...sitting in front of you to look at for ref. Keep working on it and i'm sure you'll get it looking boss.:thumbsup:

BTW...what program are you using?

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