Akuma Sketch/Color

[Astaroth.NL]

Hey I really like it man, great pose. Reminds me of street fighter manga (2 it was?) really loved that one btw. I dunno if I like the sketch or the coloured version better though. Sorry dun mean to let your colouring hours go to waiste :p But dun mind me I'm always fond of sketches, maybe it's because the coloured version is kinda sketchy too (more?), maybe the the lines on the face tro dark?

Dunno but love it!! :beer: Cheers, anyone else can help me out?

[Vormm]

Man wants crits so let him have them..
The left side hand(the man's left, not picture's) bends too much in. If it would be a bit lower it would be anatomically possible, but then again it would be behind the torso. I understand the angle is bit from bird perspective, but still. And fist of the right hand looks like it had been added later with glue.

[Astaroth.NL]

Hmmz, that's a bit true indeed, didn't even notice that, more kinda look to the overall feel guess. But now that I look at it those r the only things that I see, however maybe there are two things that can boost this thing up even more.

-maybe some objects on the back ground wich are really faded for more dynamic feel. (dunno how it would look if that's in colour though since he's mostley grey may have opposite effect)

- could try to add an extra layer off overal shadow to the right side of his body(his point of view), lighter then the shadow now or maybe even darken current shadow. When the lightsource at his upper left become more appearant ( is that good english?:surprised ) you might as some realistic dynamic feel as well.

Like your style btw as I said, have some more to post?

[eLm0]

great line work

not to dis your colouring unless you were going for that look
but do some more colouring cause it has serious potenial

great stuff tho

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