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robit175
01-12-2009, 01:09 PM
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Title: beautiful
Name: Feng Liu
Country: China
Software: Painter, Photoshop

Hello everyone, from the very early CGTALK concern, and very excited to post the first time. The bringing of the new year is my first painting was in my spare time painting, painting is a look at a painting of girls moved to tears at the scene. One day, his mind suddenly came up with this idea out on the painting. This painting, I drew a very long time has not been very satisfied with the hope that we show you more. I like it very much there, "SPAWN", so to write the name of painting is SPAWN ~! Thank you ~!
linainverse23
01-12-2009, 08:22 PM
great conceptualization and layout of the piece. The detail work, overall rendering, and lighting of the piece is very well done. slight recommendation. The top woman's leg (the one under the bent leg) is a little to undifined and soft, loosing some of it's substance as a well rounded leg. And the middle woman's bent leg has a hard edge alond the side, probably due to the overlay shadow over it. That edge could be softened up a little and the other leg slightly more defined. I love the main woman's face, and the eyes are very catching. It is very well done overall.
linainverse23
01-12-2009, 11:07 PM
great conceptualization and layout of the piece. The detail work, overall rendering, and lighting of the piece is very well done. slight recommendation. The top woman's leg (the one under the bent leg) is a little to undifined and soft, loosing some of it's substance as a well rounded leg. And the middle woman's bent leg has a hard edge alond the side, probably due to the overlay shadow over it. That edge could be softened up a little and the other leg slightly more defined. I love the main woman's face, and the eyes are very catching. It is very well done overall.
alserov
01-12-2009, 11:59 PM
Great image! Wonderful girls! The curves are great, the forms are sensual. The only thing that bothers me a little is the difference of the camera angles. i mean, there are two merged images - the boat with beauties and the face of a girl. The front view of a girl and something close to the top view of a boat. It feels a bit unnatural. It might be better to merge images with the similar camera angles - two top vies or two front views. But this is just how i feel. It is not carved in stone :p

Otherwise, wonderful work! Keep it up! You are doing great! The girls are gorgeous!
robit175
01-13-2009, 02:37 AM
Very grateful to the two friends back, I agree with your argument. Sense of space is my weaknesses but also to learn the future. A painting to find out after the Federation is not satisfied with the place, looking forward to the next paintings can solve it ~! Thank you ~!
phoenix
01-13-2009, 05:35 AM
Pretty solid piece looking good


regards
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