CGTalk - Grey girl redone

CybrGfx

01-05-2009, 10:34 PM

Too many pointy things in the shadows.

The eyes look weird in shape. The eye on the LH side looks like it has a large goiter on the upper eyelid.

You're overworking this.
Smooth the pointy bits, streamline the face tones a bit more (refine the chin, it looks stripey), and move on. Continuing to overwork it won't improve it at this point.

~C

Nimue

01-06-2009, 12:02 AM

I have been working on this for a while in Illustrator and would like a few critiques.

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h124/mixtili/julie-1.jpg

Thank you.

Littleberu

01-06-2009, 12:17 AM

Too much details and shading in her face make her look old, especially around the eyes and the nose.

Simplify those area, and you may end up with something quite nice.

Nimue

01-06-2009, 01:33 AM

Thank you both for your help. I will be working on the things you both said. I agree with both your points.

Nimue

01-12-2009, 06:35 AM

I redid a lot of this picture and I am ready for some new crits. thank you every one for the help.

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h124/mixtili/julia-redone.jpg

Wooz1

01-13-2009, 01:18 PM

I like it although there seems to be a lack of shading between the bottom of her neck and shoulder blades, she seems like a rather slim women so would I be right to suggest that D:

I maybe wrong though after all if you referenced it I'm sure you are aware what should and shouldn't be shaded :D

Nimue

01-13-2009, 05:04 PM

Thank you. I do agree with the shading on the neck. I'll have to mess around with it a little more.

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