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myo
06-24-2003, 03:24 AM
forgot to attach the pic...any comments on my pic welcome

http://myo.www4.dotnetplayground.com/keoshi/cards2.jpg

http://www.keoshi.co.uk

Pufferfish
06-24-2003, 09:10 AM
hi myo,

I will give you some constructive criticism, dont kill me :)

just some points I would change... ( not in any particular order )

1. The stand of the flatscreen looks a bit weird. Change the material or add better reflection map to it.
It also needs more faces it is now quite angular.

2. Material of your table ( I assume it is table) has too much bump on it. Also the tiling of the material is a bit weird.. there are some thicker seams that comes when egdes of your bitmap meets? Should they be there? (minor thing)

3. Your businesscards are the main thing in this image? If so, give them more light. Now the cards are bit dark. Try to lessen background lighting, instead make some light come out from the screen.

4. Check the composition. It now looks like the "camera man" is trying to fit all items in the same image, but is failing.


I like the glass hemisphere..nice prism colors :)

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