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Animramesh
01-06-2009, 02:04 AM
hi Guys,

Hope u guys Enjoy it. file:///C:/Users/rameshv/Desktop/DEC_WIP.jpg

http://in.youtube.com/watch?v=bfch_MrQdEQ

Cheers
Ramesh V

Sweetbix
01-06-2009, 09:05 AM
My crits... The difference between the styles of the two models is a little distracting but you work with what you can, right :D His eyes don't look like they're looking at her, they seem to be looking past her. When she says "An outline" her mouth just flaps about, it doesn't look like the sync was done properly here. Something feels a bit off when the girl stops twirling the pen and resumes a writing position - too fast maybe.

Overall it's a good start but I think a couple more hours on it would really benefit it.

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