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Connecter
01-04-2009, 12:08 AM
hey i have been painting for 3/4 weeks

i really want some constructive critism on this piece

http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs40/f/2009/003/b/8/SP2_Moons_by_ConnecterGFX.jpg
http://connectergfx.deviantart.com/art/SP2-Moons-108321932

thx

siiilon
01-04-2009, 12:23 AM
Well, I just say you my opinion :
-good composition and perspective, i really like it
-what is the light source? if moons, all should be a lot darker. If something not seen in the background below horizont, then the lower half of the image should be in cast shadow, which should have a different overal mood, but sounds interesting either
-no matter where exactly the light is comming from, the road shouldn't have so much specular reflections in the down-left corner of the image
-I miss clearer background and midground separation, maybe the moons are too crisp

The whole image I think really deserves furter attention. I am not very experienced and hope that someone more experienced will correct my mistaken observations. Thank you and keep it up >:)

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