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Militza
01-02-2009, 10:32 PM
2nd in the Elementals series. This time it's a water spirit.
Stay tuned :)

http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/2771/waterspiritwipbc4.th.jpg (http://img50.imageshack.us/my.php?image=waterspiritwipbc4.jpg)

Cati
01-04-2009, 12:58 PM
It looks a good start but there's something not right with your composition. The bubble is too close to the edge. Perhaps you'd need to resize he canvas so there's more space to the left - that way you'll have more weight to the lonely bubble on that side.

I suggest also to bring out the shape of the legs better. They seem to defy the laws of anatomy. But it's a fantasy character so maybe you just need to make a better definition. I think the knee looks awkward so close to the torso. The character looks it's otherwise plump but with skinny legs and almost non-excistent thighs.

Militza
01-04-2009, 07:27 PM
It looks a good start but there's something not right with your composition. The bubble is too close to the edge. Perhaps you'd need to resize he canvas so there's more space to the left - that way you'll have more weight to the lonely bubble on that side.

I suggest also to bring out the shape of the legs better. They seem to defy the laws of anatomy. But it's a fantasy character so maybe you just need to make a better definition. I think the knee looks awkward so close to the torso. The character looks it's otherwise plump but with skinny legs and almost non-excistent thighs.

Hey Cati, thanks for the reply. The thing is I just post the cropped central part of the whole image so the composition isn't fully visible yet. I'll definitely have to separate crops and just post full images instead of crops. Sorry for that.

Considering her anatomy, she's bent and the hair is all around her so she's wrapped in it. That's why her knees are close to the torso. Legs still need to be better defined, I focused on other things for the moment. :)

Latest update.

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/4695/waterspiritwipjv2.th.jpg (http://img220.imageshack.us/my.php?image=waterspiritwipjv2.jpg)

After this one I go with the full images.

Militza
01-05-2009, 02:20 PM
I should have updated gradually but... meh. I had to do it this way.

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/3474/waterspiritwipnj3.th.jpg (http://img136.imageshack.us/my.php?image=waterspiritwipnj3.jpg)

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